Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. "IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi computer-based 18/6/2022)
I. Đề bài
The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
III. Phân tích
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- Overall: There are 5 stages in the process, beginning with preparing the water for the drinks, and culminating with the packaging and delivery of the finished product.
- Body 1: Stage 1+2
- In the first stage of the process, water is put through a filter before a softener and other chemicals are added to it.
- The clean water is thereafter pumped to electric heaters and goes through a cooling pipe to another device where the carbonation process takes place.
- Body 2: Stage 3+4
- In the third stage of the process, the carbonated water is put into a mixing tank where it is mixed with colouring, flavouring, and sweetener. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The carbonated water is then sent to a cylindrical tank in which it is mixed with colouring, syrup, and flavours, and filtered for the second time before being filled into bottles and cans)
- The resulting mixture is then filtered before being packaged into cans and bottles.
- Once the bottles and cans have been packaged into boxes, they are transported to supermarkets where they are ready to be sold.
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The diagram illustrates the process involved in producing carbonated drinks.
Overall, there are five stages in the process, beginning with preparing the water for the drinks and culminating with the packaging and delivery of the finished product.
In the first stage of the process, water is filtered and then treated with a softener and other chemicals, ensuring it is clean and safe for consumption. The clean water is then pumped to electric heaters, where it is heated and subsequently passed through a cooling pipe to another device. In this device, the carbonation process takes place, infusing the water with carbon dioxide to create carbonated water.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
In the third stage of the process, the carbonated water is transferred to a mixing tank, where it is combined with coloring, flavoring, and sweeteners, and then carefully blended to achieve the desired taste and appearance. The resulting mixture is then filtered again to ensure consistency and purity before being funneled into cans and bottles. In the final stage, these bottles and cans are packaged into boxes, ready for transportation. The packaged drinks are then delivered to supermarkets, where they are available for consumers to purchase.
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