Phân tích"The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks."IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi computer-based 24/6/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. "IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi computer-based 18/6/2022)

The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.

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  • Overall: There are 5 stages in the process, beginning with preparing the water for the drinks, and culminating with the packaging and delivery of the finished product.
  • Body 1: Stage 1+2
    • In the first stage of the process, water is put through a filter before a softener and other chemicals are added to it. 
    • The clean water is thereafter pumped to electric heaters and goes through a cooling pipe to another device where the carbonation process takes place.
  • Body 2: Stage 3+4
    • In the third stage of the process, the carbonated water is put into a mixing tank where it is mixed with colouring, flavouring, and sweetener.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The carbonated water is then sent to a cylindrical tank in which it is mixed with colouring, syrup, and flavours, and filtered for the second time before being filled into bottles and cans)
    • The resulting mixture is then filtered before being packaged into cans and bottles. 
    • Once the bottles and cans have been packaged into boxes, they are transported to supermarkets where they are ready to be sold.

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