I. Đề bài
The diagram shows how chocolate is produced.
II. Từ vựng
III. Phân tích
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- There are various steps in the making of liquid chocolate, commencing with harvesting cacao beans and concluding with liquid chocolate being produced (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The process demonstrates how chocolate is made from the initial stage of plucking ripe red pods off the cocoa trees located in South America, Africa and Indonesia to the final stage of producing liquid chocolate HOẶC There are ten main steps involved in the production of chocolate and the transformation of a ripe cocoa pod into an edible form) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "involve" tiếng anh
- Body 1: Từ bước 1 đến bước 6
- The cocoa comes from the cacao tree, which is grown in the South American and African continents and the country of Indonesia >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "grow" tiếng anh
- White cocoa beans are extracted from the harvested pods when they are ripe (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Upon being collected, the peel is removed, leaving white cocoa beans for fermentation)
- Following fermentation, they are spread out in the sun and left to dry (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: those fermented beans are dehydrated by sun-drying) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "spread" & phrasal verb "spread out"
- Once the dry beans have been placed in sacks, they are ready to be transported to a factory by train or lorry >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng topic Transportation IELTS
- Body 2: Các bước còn lại
- In the factory, the beans undergo a roasting process at around 350 degree Celsius, after which they are moved to a crushing machine to separate the outer shell and the inner part called the nibs (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: They are then crushed in a rotating machine once their outer shell has been removed) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "once" như liên từ
- Liquid chocolate is produced by pressing the inner part of the bean with the help of large rollers.
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