Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The plants show a student common room from five years ago and now"IELTS WRITING TASK 1
I. Đề bài
The plants show a student common room from five years ago and now
II. Kiến thức liên quan
III. Phân tích
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- The common room has been refurnished to incorporate more facilities, especially in the communal open area (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the room has undergone considerable transformations in terms of seating areas and room amenities with a view to providing a more comfortable experience there for students)
- Body 1: Viết về biểu đồ 1 (According to the plan from 5 years ago)
- Mô tả bookshelf:
- A bookshelf was situated on the bottom right corner.
- Mô tả khu vực ở giữa:
- There were a total of 4 round tables in the communal area, laid out in an alternate arrangement with each of which being surrounded by small chairs (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: in the middle of the room were four round tables, accompanied by four chairs for students to sit around)
- Khu vực phía trên:
- From the entrance on the West, one could also spot, in successive order, a cupboard, a sink, 2 benches, a microwave and a refrigerator along the section to the North (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Convenience features for students on the upper corner of the room were quite diverse at that time as from left to right respectively were a sink, a cupboard, two benches, a microwave and a refrigerator. Additionally, on the right side of the room was a cabinet)
- Mô tả bookshelf:
- Body 2: Viết về biểu đồ 2 (In the present day) tương ứng với body 1
- To the South of the room, there is a new bench for students’ laptops, adjacent to a new television set with surrounding armchairs, which has taken the place of the old bookshelf.
- A new drinks vending machine has also been added beside the fridge.
- The two round tables in the middle have been removed to free up the space. To compensate for this, a long rectangular table with multiple chairs has been placed near the entrance.
- Except for the one bench that was replaced by an additional microwave, the row of furniture to the North remained almost the same.
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