Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The plants show a student common room from five years ago and now"IELTS WRITING TASK 1
I. Đề bài
The plants show a student common room from five years ago and now
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
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Overall:
The common room has been refurnished to incorporate more facilities, especially in the communal open area.
(IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the room has undergone considerable transformations in terms of seating areas and room amenities with a view to providing a more comfortable experience there for students)
Body 1: Viết về biểu đồ 1 (According to the plan from 5 years ago)
Mô tả bookshelf:
A bookshelf was situated on the bottom right corner.Mô tả khu vực ở giữa:
There were a total of 4 round tables in the communal area, laid out in an alternate arrangement, with each of which being surrounded by small chairs.
(IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: in the middle of the room were four round tables, accompanied by four chairs for students to sit around)Khu vực phía trên:
From the entrance on the West, one could also spot, in successive order, a cupboard, a sink, 2 benches, a microwave and a refrigerator along the section to the North.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
(IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Convenience features for students on the upper corner of the room were quite diverse at that time as from left to right respectively were a sink, a cupboard, two benches, a microwave and a refrigerator. Additionally, on the right side of the room was a cabinet)
Body 2: Viết về biểu đồ 2 (In the present day) tương ứng với Body 1
To the South of the room, there is a new bench for students’ laptops, adjacent to a new television set with surrounding armchairs, which has taken the place of the old bookshelf.
A new drinks vending machine has also been added beside the fridge.
The two round tables in the middle have been removed to free up the space. To compensate for this, a long rectangular table with multiple chairs has been placed near the entrance.
Except for the one bench that was replaced by an additional microwave, the row of furniture to the North remained almost the same.
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The two plans illustrate (v: mô tả rõ ràng / show clearly) the changes made to a student common room over the past five years.
Overall, the room has been refurbished (v: tân trang lại / renovated) to offer students more modern amenities (n: tiện nghi / useful features), particularly in terms of the communal space.
According to the layout from five years ago, a bookshelf (n: giá sách / storage unit for books) occupied the bottom right corner. Four round tables were arranged alternately (adv: xen kẽ / in a regular pattern) with small chairs in the central area. Along the top wall, there was a row of utilities (n: dãy tiện ích / a line of useful items) including a sink, a cupboard, two benches, a microwave, and a refrigerator.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?
Today, the bookshelf has been replaced by a television set (n: bộ tivi / TV device) and a new bench for laptops, surrounded by comfortable armchairs (n: ghế bành êm ái / cushioned single-seat chairs). A vending machine (n: máy bán hàng tự động / automated dispenser) has also been added. Two round tables were removed and replaced with a long rectangular table with multiple chairs. Except for one bench that was replaced with a second microwave, the rest of the kitchen area remains unchanged.
📘 New Vocabulary List
illustrate (mô tả rõ ràng)
synonyms: depict, demonstrate, portray
antonyms: hide, obscure, distort
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The two plans illustrate the changes...
refurbished (tân trang lại)
synonyms: renovated, modernized, updated
antonyms: deteriorated, damaged, neglected
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: the room has been refurbished...
amenities (tiện nghi)
synonyms: facilities, conveniences, features
antonyms: inconveniences, discomforts, obstacles
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: to offer students more modern amenities
bookshelf (giá sách)
synonyms: bookcase, shelving, rack
antonyms: table, drawer, cabinet
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: a bookshelf occupied the bottom right...
alternately (xen kẽ)
synonyms: intermittently, sequentially, interchangeably
antonyms: simultaneously, continuously, randomly
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: tables were arranged alternately...
row of utilities (dãy tiện ích)
synonyms: set of appliances, range of facilities, line of equipment
antonyms: emptiness, absence of features, single unit
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: there was a row of utilities including...
television set (bộ tivi)
synonyms: TV, monitor, screen
antonyms: radio, speaker, projector
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: replaced by a television set...
armchairs (ghế bành êm ái)
synonyms: lounge chairs, recliners, cushioned seats
antonyms: stools, benches, folding chairs
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: surrounded by comfortable armchairs
vending machine (máy bán hàng tự động)
synonyms: automated dispenser, food machine, snack station
antonyms: canteen, staffed counter, kitchen
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: A vending machine has also been added...
💡 Difficult Grammar Structures
The room has been refurbished to offer...
Cấu trúc bị động hoàn thành: has been + V3
→ Căn phòng đã được tân trang để cung cấp...Translate: Căn phòng đã được tân trang để cung cấp cho sinh viên nhiều tiện nghi hiện đại hơn.
...with small chairs in the central area.
Cụm giới từ chỉ vị trí “in the central area”
→ Với những chiếc ghế nhỏ ở khu vực trung tâm.
Except for one bench that was replaced...
Mệnh đề quan hệ rút gọn bị động: that was replaced
→ Ngoại trừ một ghế dài đã bị thay thế...
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