Phân tích"The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 22/3/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980." IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi IELTS 22/3/2023)

The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980.

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  • Overall:

    • The docks have undergone extensive redevelopment, transforming the previously industrial area into a versatile space that now includes a variety of recreational, educational, and residential facilities on both sides of the river.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

  • Body 1: Viết về map 1

    • In earlier times/In the past, the northern bank of the river featured two warehouses accompanied by an adjacent crane.>> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "crane" tiếng anh

    • The southern bank had one warehouse and another crane. 
    • The river previously facilitated ships journeying towards the coast.
  • Body 2: Viết về map 2

    • At present, the northern bank showcases a sailing club, an educational facility (repurposed from a warehouse), and a designated area for children to play.>> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "education" tiếng anh

    • The redevelopment of the southern bank encompasses a hotel, residential units (converted from a warehouse), and parking amenities, accompanied by a riverfront promenade extending along the bank. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The southern bank has been redeveloped to include a hotel, apartments (repurposed from a warehouse), and parking facilities, accompanied by a river walk that stretches along the bank)

    • Regarding the river itself, ships are no longer present, and instead, a ship museum has been established on the eastern side, adjacent to the northern bank 

    • A bridge has been constructed to link the banks on the western side of the map, accompanied by a a strategically placed flood barrier.>> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "erect" tiếng anh

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