Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999." IELTS WRITING TASK 1.
I. Đề bài
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
III. Phân tích
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- More males had skilled vocational diploma, post graduate diploma and master’s degree than females, whereas the proportions of females with undergraduate diploma and Bachelor’s degree were higher than those of men with these degrees.
- The highest figures for women and men were reported in undergraduate diploma and skilled vocational diploma, respectively. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng & Word form của "vocation"
- Body 1: Viết về Post graduate Diploma + Master Degree
- Women had more interest in postgraduate diploma and master’s degree than men (nêu số liệu respectively)
- Nearly equal number of men and women took admission in bachelor’s degree (nêu số liệu)
- Body 2: Viết về category còn lại
- Men gave more preference to two out of five after school qualifications, namely skilled vocational diploma and undergraduate diploma. (nêu số liệu) >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng & Word form của "preference / prefer"
- This clearly states that women were least interested in these two diplomas (nêu số liệu)
- In undergraduate diploma, 7 out of 10 students were male and 3 were female.