Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use"IELTS WRITING TASK 1
I. Đề bài
The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use
II. Kiến thức liên quan
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Ở đây có thể viết mỗi biểu đồ 1 đoạn thân bài vì mặc dù các category (heating, water heating…) là giống nhau giữa 2 biểu đồ nhưng thông tin hoàn toàn tách biệt
- Body 1: Biểu đồ 1:
- 42% of the energy consumed in an Australian family is used for heating, which is the highest figure on the chart, followed by that of water heating, at approximately 30%.
- The figure for other appliances makes up merely 15% and the rest, including refrigeration, cooling, and lighting, occupy trivial proportions, under 7% each. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "figure" tiếng anh
- Body 2: Biểu đồ 2
- Water-heating and other appliances are the major causes, with about 32% and 28% respectively.
- The data of heating and refrigeration are lower, standing at about 15% each.
- Both cooling and lighting are responsible for the production of one-tenth of total gas emissions. >> IETLS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cấu trúc "both ...and" tiếng anh
IV. Sửa bài viết HS IELTS TUTOR