Phân tích "The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011." IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 16/2/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011." IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 16/2/2023)

The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

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  • Overall
    • The number of enquiries received by letter or email experienced a slight decrease while a substantial rise of enquiries was recorded in the site and via telephone.
  • Body 1: Viết số liệu giảm
    • In January, the figure for enquiries by letter or email stood at nearly 800, and then a marginal drop of 200 units was observed in the next six months.
  • Body 2: Viết số liệu tăng
    • Starting at just over 400 units in January, the number of off-site enquiries witnessed a significant increase to 1900 units in Jun. 
    • Despite a higher starting point, with 900 enquiries which doubled the number of enquiries received in person, the volume of telephone ones had undertaken the offline cases, with only 1600 enquiries in June >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase động từ"receive"(Diễn đạt"nhận" tiếng anh)

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

Overall, the number of enquiries received by letter or email experienced a slight decrease, while a substantial rise in enquiries was recorded in person and via telephone.

In January, the figure for enquiries by letter or email stood at nearly 800. A marginal drop of 200 units was observed over the next six months, leaving it at around 600 in June.

Starting at just over 400 units in January, the number of in-person enquiries witnessed a significant increase, reaching 1900 units in June. Despite a higher starting point, with 900 telephone enquiries in January, which doubled the number of in-person enquiries, the volume of telephone enquiries also rose significantly to 1600 in June.

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