Giải đề"Public museums and art galleries are not needed because people can see historical objects and artistic works by using computers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?​"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh cung cấp thêm PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), Hãy đọc kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ Public museums and art galleries are not needed because people can see historical objects and artistic works by using computers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? từng bước phân tích để nắm cách chia bố cục cũng như viết bài không sai task response nhé!

Public museums and art galleries are not needed because people can see historical objects and artistic works by using computers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Obtain information about art, history or culture: Lấy thông tin về nghệ thuật, lịch sử và văn hóa
• Provide us with sufficient understanding of something: Cung cấp cho chúng ta đủ sự hiểu biết về cái gì đó
• Being in the presence of something: Tận mắt chiêm ngưỡng
• Historical artefacts/artifacts: Hiện vật lịch sử
• Art works / works of art: Tác phẩm nghệ thuật
• In this digital era: Trong thời đại kỹ thuật số hiện nay. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CỤM CÓ "THIS / THAT / THESE / THOSE" THƯỜNG GẶP
• Negative/adverse/damaging/detrimental/devastating effects: Tác hại (khủng khiếp)
• To see X with one’s own eyes: Nhìn thấy X tận mắt / tận mắt thấy X
• The X at issue: Cái X đang bàn
• Far from reasonable: Nghe không có lý tí nào
• The global trend towards deindustrialization: Xu thế toàn cầu hướng về sự phi công nghiệp hóa + to name but a few: Xin dẫn ra một vài thí dụ tiêu biểu
• To raise children tech-free: Nuôi dạy con cái theo lối sống phi công nghệ
• Culturally and historically important destinations: Những điểm đến/du lịch quan trọng về phương diện văn hoá và lịch sử. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ "important" (diễn đạt "quan trọng" tiếng anh)
• A country’s architectural style: Phong cách kiến trúc của một quốc gia phản ánh văn hóa và lịch sử quốc gia đó
• Admire the grandeur of these places: Ngắm nhìn sự trang nghiêm oai vệ của những địa điểm này
• Exhibit a huge collection of priceless national masterpieces: Trưng bày một bộ sưu tầm khổng lồ các kiệt tác của quốc gia
• The aesthetic appeal of French architecture: Sức hấp dẫn về mặt thẩm mỹ của kiến trúc nước Pháp

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể chia bố cục như sau:
  • BODY 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: The existence of invaluable artifacts and artistic creations is the expression of diversity in human society, enriching the beauty of life (HOẶC: museums and galleries help us develop a sense of respect towards history and art of our own country or other countries in the world). >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Phân biệt "priceless, invaluable, valueless & worthless
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Were there no places to store historical items and art works, with the fact that modern communities are becoming increasingly similar, local inhabitants would get lost in the search of their identity and there would be nothing to break the monotony. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase "similar" tiếng anh
      • Admiring real historical objects or artworks can help people learn more about their own country’s history and aesthetic field , thus making them cherish part of their national identity.
    • Example: Imagine a world where magnificent sculptures like Michelangelo's David or ancient artifacts like Viking ships existed only in textbooks.
  • BODY 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Memorial houses and art museums offer first-hand experience to visitors so that they can sense the atmosphere of historical events and people as well as contemplate artistic masterpieces with their bare eyes (HOẶC: having real experience of seeing history-related objects or famous artworks will generate inspiration or new sources of ideas for those who are not only in the field of art or history but also for people in other professions). >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "experience" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Without museums and associated places, tourists would have no culturally and historically important destinations to visit
      • Local children would not have any chance to witness what they have theoretically learnt at school.
    • Example: Memorial houses, such as the Gandhi Ashram in Ahmedabad, India, offer a window into the lives of historical figures. These spaces can be particularly valuable for local children, as they provide a tangible connection to their history and heritage that goes beyond classroom learning.
• Có thể tham khảo các ý khác:
  • The sophistication of art or the intensity of war will be shown, which enable people to experience the authenticity  that cannot be seen on the Internet. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý  Cách dùng động từ "enable" tiếng anh
  • The most conspicuous case-in-point is when one can observe the real “Mona Lisa” at the museum, it may be a valuable cultural experience that hardly anything can compare.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Public museums and art galleries play an indispensable role in preserving and showcasing invaluable artifacts and artistic creations, enriching the tapestry of human culture. While some argue that virtual access through computers renders physical institutions obsolete, I contend that these institutions are essential for fostering a sense of identity and providing firsthand experiences that transcend digital simulation.

Firstly, the existence of museums and galleries is pivotal in preserving the diverse cultural heritage of humanity. Were there no physical spaces to house historical items and artworks, communities would risk losing touch with their identities amidst the homogenizing forces of modernity. Admiring real historical objects or artworks allows individuals to deepen their understanding of their own heritage, fostering a sense of national pride and identity. For instance, iconic masterpieces like Michelangelo's David evoke a profound connection to Italian culture and history that cannot be replicated through virtual mediums alone.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

Secondly, museums and art galleries offer unparalleled opportunities for firsthand experiences and contemplation. These physical spaces allow visitors to immerse themselves in the atmosphere of historical events and appreciate artistic masterpieces with their own eyes. Without such institutions, tourists would lack culturally enriching destinations, and local children would miss out on tangible connections to their history and heritage. For example, memorial houses like the Gandhi Ashram in Ahmedabad provide invaluable insights into the lives of historical figures, offering educational experiences that extend beyond classroom learning.

In conclusion, while technology has facilitated virtual access to historical objects and artworks, public museums and art galleries remain indispensable for preserving cultural heritage and fostering a sense of identity. These physical institutions offer firsthand experiences that cannot be replicated digitally, enriching our understanding of history and art in ways that transcend the confines of a screen.

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