Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The graph below shows the number of people taking part in a wildlife survey in Britain between 2001 and 2009" IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 27/8/2025)
I. Đề bài
The graph below shows the number of people taking part in a wildlife survey in Britain between 2001 and 2009
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The table provides information on the number of people who participated in a wildlife survey in Britain from 2001 to 2009.
Overall, there was a dramatic expansion (sự mở rộng đáng kể – a rapid and significant increase) in total participation over the period, with the final figure in 2009 being more than ten times higher than that of 2001. While adults accounted for the majority in earlier years, children’s involvement rose spectacularly (một cách ngoạn mục – in an impressive or dramatic way) by the end of the period.
In terms of total numbers, participation grew from only 48,000 in 2001 to 248,000 in 2003. It then continued to climb, reaching 364,000 in 2005 before experiencing a slight dip to 362,000 in 2007. Finally, it peaked at 540,000 in 2009, marking the highest figure in the given period.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?
Looking at adults and children separately, the number of adults increased sharply from 36,000 in 2001 to around 332,000 in 2005 before declining modestly to 270,000 in 2009. By contrast, children’s participation remained relatively stable, hovering around 36,000 in 2003, 32,000 in 2005, and 31,000 in 2007, before surging (tăng vọt – rise suddenly and powerfully) to 270,000 in 2009, reaching an equal footing (vị thế ngang bằng – the same level or position) with adults.
📖 Vocabulary Bank
dramatic expansion (sự mở rộng đáng kể) – rapid and large-scale growth.
Synonyms: remarkable growth, striking increase, significant surge
Antonyms: gradual decline, slight drop, modest reduction
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "there was a dramatic expansion in total participation..."
spectacularly (một cách ngoạn mục) – in a way that is extremely impressive.
Synonyms: remarkably, impressively, extraordinarily
Antonyms: ordinarily, moderately, unremarkably
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "children’s involvement rose spectacularly by the end..."
footing (vị thế ngang bằng) – an equal position or basis.
Synonyms: equality, parity, balance
Antonyms: inequality, disparity, imbalance
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "surged … to an equal footing with adults at 270,000...">> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
surged (tăng vọt) – rose suddenly and powerfully.
Synonyms: soared, rocketed, escalated
Antonyms: plummeted, dropped, decreased
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "then surged from just 31,000 to an equal footing..."
modestly (một cách khiêm tốn) – to a limited or small extent.
Synonyms: slightly, marginally, moderately
Antonyms: substantially, considerably, dramatically
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "before declining modestly to 270,000 in 2009."
⚙️ Difficult Grammar Structures
there was a dramatic expansion…
Grammar: existential “there was” + noun phrase
Translation: Đã có một sự mở rộng đáng kể…
While adults accounted for the majority…, children’s involvement rose spectacularly…
Grammar: while + clause (contrastive complex sentence)
Translation: Trong khi người lớn chiếm đa số…, sự tham gia của trẻ em lại tăng ngoạn mục…
By contrast, children’s participation remained relatively stable…
Grammar: By contrast = linking device for comparison.
Translation: Ngược lại, sự tham gia của trẻ em vẫn tương đối ổn định…
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