Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The graphs below show the percentage of math graduates and all graduates who got full time job after graduating from a university in Australia and also show the average salary of both these types of grads, from 2004 to 2012" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (COMPUTER-BASED 29/7/2022).
I. Đề bài
The graphs below show the percentage of math graduates and all graduates who got full time job after graduating from a university in Australia and also show the average salary of both these types of grads, from 2004 to 2012.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- Maths graduates outdid graduates in general both for average salary and full time employment (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: maths graduates exceeded bachelor's graduates when asked for both general compensation and all-day occupation)
- While the proportion of those securing full time employment remained relatively stable, the salaries rose with time for both maths and all graduates.
- Body 1: Biếu đồ 1
- In 2004 about 62% of alumni got all-day work although around 80% of math graduates had an all-day occupation. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "around" tiếng anh
- Over the next three years, both figures increased to around 10%.
- Body 2: Biểu đồ 2
- Có thể triển khai theo các ý sau của IELTS TUTOR:
- Maths grads số liệu tăng đều qua các năm.
- All graduates số liệu tăng qua các năm nhưng không bằng maths grads.
- Hoặc IELTS TUTOR gợi ý triển khai theo hướng khác:
- In 2004, the average yearly salary for all graduates was about $41,000, and the figure was the same for maths graduates >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "Same" tiếng anh
- In the next 8 years, the salaries went up for both, but the salaries rose more for maths graduates as compared to the figures for salaries for all graduates (nêu số liệu)
- In 2012, maths graduates secured a yearly pay of $56,000, whereas graduates got about $51,000.
- Có thể triển khai theo các ý sau của IELTS TUTOR:
- Overall:
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The graphs illustrate the percentage of math graduates and all graduates who obtained full-time employment after graduating from universities in Australia, as well as their average salaries, from 2004 to 2012.
Overall, math graduates surpassed general graduates in both average salary and full-time employment rates. While the proportion of graduates securing full-time employment remained relatively stable, salaries for both groups increased over time.
In 2004, approximately 62% of all graduates found full-time employment, compared to about 80% of math graduates. Over the next three years, both percentages rose by around 10%. However, the proportions declined for both groups afterward, returning to levels similar to those in 2004 by 2012.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
Regarding salaries, the average annual income for all graduates in 2004 was roughly $41,000, which was also the starting figure for math graduates. Over the following eight years, salaries increased for both groups, with math graduates experiencing a more pronounced rise. By 2012, math graduates earned an average annual salary of $56,000, while all graduates earned approximately $51,000.
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