Phân tích "The graphs below show the percentage of math graduates and all graduates who got full time job after graduating from a university in Australia and also show the average salary of both these types of grads, from 2004 to 2012" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (COMPUTER-BASED 29/7/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The graphs below show the percentage of math graduates and all graduates who got full time job after graduating from a university in Australia and also show the average salary of both these types of grads, from 2004 to 2012" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (COMPUTER-BASED 29/7/2022).

The graphs below show the percentage of math graduates and all graduates who got full time job after graduating from a university in Australia and also show the average salary of both these types of grads, from 2004 to 2012.

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  • Overall:
    • Maths graduates outdid graduates in general both for average salary and full time employment (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: maths graduates exceeded bachelor's graduates when asked for both general compensation and all-day occupation)
    • While the proportion of those securing full time employment remained relatively stable, the salaries rose with time for both maths and all graduates.
  • Body 1: Biếu đồ 1 
    • In 2004 about 62% of alumni got all-day work although around 80% of math graduates had an all-day occupation. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "around" tiếng anh
    • Over the next three years, both figures increased to around 10%. 
  • Body 2: Biểu đồ 2
    • Có thể triển khai theo các ý sau của IELTS TUTOR: 
      • Maths grads số liệu tăng đều qua các năm.
      • All graduates số liệu tăng qua các năm nhưng không bằng maths grads.
    • Hoặc IELTS TUTOR gợi ý triển khai theo hướng khác:
      • In 2004, the average yearly salary for all graduates was about $41,000, and the figure was the same for maths graduates >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "Same" tiếng anh
      • In the next 8 years, the salaries went up for both, but the salaries rose more for maths graduates as compared to the figures for salaries for all graduates (nêu số liệu)
      • In 2012, maths graduates secured a yearly pay of $56,000, whereas graduates got about $51,000.

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