Bên cạnh Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8/2020 [Audio+Transcript], IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The international community must act immediately to ensure all nations to reduce their consumption of fossil fuels e.g. gas and oil. To what extent do you agree/ disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.
I. Đề bài
The international community must act immediately to ensure all nations to reduce their consumption of fossil fuels e.g. gas and oil. To what extent do you agree/ disagree?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
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- Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
- Main idea: Fossil fuel is one of the major contributors to global warming and climate change.
- Supporting idea:
- The burning of oil and coal produces tonnes of carbon dioxide per year, and it is one of the greenhouse gases that enhance radioactive forcing and contribute to global warming.
- The rise in temperature of the Earth has associated with numerous of adverse effects such as melting of polar ice caps, flooding of low-lying areas and rise to the sea level.
- Example: China’s coal-powered plants, for example, depletes the ozone layer over the other nations, this, in turn, affects the whole world.
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea: Fossil fuel is one of the major contributors to global warming and climate change.
- Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
- Main idea: fossil fuels are generally considered to be non-renewable resources because they take millions of years to form. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "form" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- If the utilisation of mineral fuels is not reduced and controlled, it could be exhausted and people may soon run short of fossil fuels while scientists have not found an alternative energy source. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "alternative" tiếng anh
- The price of fossil fuels has also increased greatly which could lead countries to fall into a fuel war. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "lead" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea: fossil fuels are generally considered to be non-renewable resources because they take millions of years to form. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "form" tiếng anh
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The international community (cộng đồng quốc tế – global alliance of nations) must act collectively to reduce the use of fossil fuels because these energy sources pose grave repercussions (hậu quả nghiêm trọng – serious consequences) for the planet. I totally agree that immediate measures are indispensable to curb fossil fuel consumption.
First, fossil fuels are the leading cause of global warming (nóng lên toàn cầu – worldwide rise in temperature) and climate change. When oil and coal are burnt, they release tonnes of carbon dioxide, a greenhouse gas (khí nhà kính – gas trapping heat in the atmosphere) that intensifies radioactive forcing (tác động bức xạ – the change in balance between incoming and outgoing energy in Earth’s atmosphere). The consequences are evident: the melting of ice caps, flooding of low-lying areas (vùng đất thấp – land near sea level), and rising sea levels. For instance, China’s reliance on coal-powered plants has depleted the ozone layer, negatively affecting even nations far beyond its borders. These examples illustrate how fossil fuel use brings far-reaching impacts (tác động sâu rộng – extensive effects across many areas).>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?
Second, fossil fuels are finite resources (tài nguyên hữu hạn – resources that will eventually run out), taking millions of years to form. Without reduction and control, they could be exhausted in the foreseeable future. This would trigger severe shortages before reliable alternative energy sources (nguồn năng lượng thay thế – other forms of usable energy such as solar, wind, nuclear) are developed. Moreover, the soaring price of oil and gas could ignite fuel wars (cuộc chiến nhiên liệu – conflict over access to energy), destabilizing global peace. Thus, reducing reliance on fossil fuels is not only an environmental imperative (mệnh lệnh về môi trường – urgent necessity for the environment) but also an economic and political necessity.
In conclusion, curbing fossil fuel consumption is essential to protect both our environment and future energy security.
New Vocabulary List
international community – cộng đồng quốc tế – global alliance of nations
Synonyms: worldwide coalition, global society, international body
Antonyms: individual nation, isolated state, domestic society
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The international community must act collectively to reduce the use of fossil fuels.grave repercussions – hậu quả nghiêm trọng – serious consequences
Synonyms: severe consequences, dire outcomes, damaging effects
Antonyms: minor effects, trivial outcomes, negligible consequences
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: These energy sources pose grave repercussions for the planet.global warming – nóng lên toàn cầu – worldwide rise in temperature
Synonyms: climate heating, planetary warming, temperature increase
Antonyms: cooling, temperature decline, climate stability
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Fossil fuels are the leading cause of global warming.radioactive forcing – tác động bức xạ – change in balance between incoming and outgoing energy in Earth’s atmosphere
Synonyms: climate forcing, energy imbalance, atmospheric radiation effect
Antonyms: climate equilibrium, balanced energy, stable radiation
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Carbon dioxide is a greenhouse gas that intensifies radioactive forcing.finite resources – tài nguyên hữu hạn – resources that will eventually run out
Synonyms: limited resources, exhaustible resources, depletable reserves
Antonyms: infinite resources, renewable sources, abundant supply
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Fossil fuels are finite resources, taking millions of years to form.
Difficult Grammar Structures
“The international community must act collectively to reduce the use of fossil fuels because these energy sources pose grave repercussions for the planet.”
Complex sentence with subordinate clause (because-clause).
Vietnamese: Cộng đồng quốc tế phải hành động tập thể để giảm việc sử dụng nhiên liệu hóa thạch vì những nguồn năng lượng này gây ra hậu quả nghiêm trọng cho hành tinh.
“For instance, China’s reliance on coal-powered plants has depleted the ozone layer, negatively affecting even nations far beyond its borders.”
Use of present perfect + participle clause (negatively affecting…) for conciseness.
Vietnamese: Ví dụ, sự phụ thuộc của Trung Quốc vào các nhà máy chạy bằng than đã làm suy giảm tầng ô-dôn, ảnh hưởng tiêu cực đến cả những quốc gia xa ngoài biên giới của nó.
“Without reduction and control, they could be exhausted in the foreseeable future.”
Conditional structure without if (reduced conditional).
Vietnamese: Nếu không giảm thiểu và kiểm soát, chúng có thể bị cạn kiệt trong tương lai gần.
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