Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The table give information about the percentage of employers who had difficulty finding workers in 4 sectors in one country in 2003 and 2004." IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (COMPUTER 4/5/2022)

The table give information about the percentage of employers who had difficulty finding workers in 4 sectors in one country in 2003 and 2004.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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  • Overall:
    • The proportions of employers who did face problems in employing skilled and unskilled workers were generally less than those who faced the same difficulty in 2004.
    • Finding technical and managerial staff for work was easier than finding both skilled and unskilled staffs in both years. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "STAFF" tiếng anh 
  • Body 1: Viết về Difficult in finding skilled workers (%) + Difficult in finding unskilled workers (số liệu nhìn chung tăng)
    • When an average of 41 to 47% job-givers encountered the issue in recruiting skilled workers in 2003, in case of unskilled workers, it ranged from 20 to 26%. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "average" tiếng anh
    • In 2004, these rates rose to 41 to 51% and 19 to 29% respectively.
  • Body 2: Viết về Difficulty in finding technical and managerial staff số liệu nhìn chung giảm)
    • In case of technical and managerial staff, the percentages of employers who found the difficulty were comparatively very less and decreased during the period shown.
    • In 2003, this ranged between 2 and 14, in 2004; this was marked between 2 and 10.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The table compares the proportion of employers (tỷ lệ nhà tuyển dụng – the percentage of job-givers) who struggled to hire workers across four employment sectors in one country in 2003 and 2004.

Overall, the percentage of recruiters (tỷ lệ nhà tuyển dụng – those seeking to fill positions) facing challenges in finding both skilled and unskilled labor (lao động lành nghề và không lành nghề – trained and non-trained workers) rose over the period, whereas the figures for technical and managerial personnel (nhân sự kỹ thuật và quản lý – workers with specialized or leadership roles) declined slightly.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

In 2003, between 41% and 47% of employers experienced difficulty hiring skilled workers, increasing to a notably higher range (mức tăng đáng kể – clearly larger percentage bracket) of 41% to 51% in 2004. As for unskilled workers, this rose modestly (tăng nhẹ – increased slightly) from 20–26% to 19–29%.

By contrast, the proportion of employers encountering obstacles (tỷ lệ gặp khó khăn – percentage facing hiring problems) when recruiting technical and managerial staff dropped slightly, from 2–14% in 2003 to just 2–10% in 2004, indicating less demand-supply mismatch (ít chênh lệch cung cầu – better labor market alignment) in these roles.

✅ New Vocabulary with Definitions (Bolded in Essay)

✅ 3 Synonyms & 3 Antonyms for Each New Vocab (with Examples)

Example: "rose modestly"

• Synonyms: increased slightly, grew gradually, climbed mildly

• Antonyms: plummeted, dropped sharply, fell dramatically

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "this rose modestly from 20–26% to 19–29%"

Example: "technical and managerial personnel"

• Synonyms: specialized staff, supervisory workforce, professional employees

• Antonyms: entry-level workers, manual laborers, temporary hires

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "technical and managerial staff dropped slightly"

✅ Complex Grammar Structures Used & Explanation

1. Relative Clause:

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ “the percentage of recruiters who struggled to hire workers...”
     → "who struggled" bổ nghĩa cho "recruiters"
     → Tạm dịch: "tỷ lệ những người tuyển dụng gặp khó khăn khi thuê lao động..."

2. Comparative Structure with Clause:

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ “...was easier than finding both skilled and unskilled staff...”
     → So sánh "easier than + V-ing clause"
     → Dịch: "dễ hơn so với việc tìm lao động lành nghề và không lành nghề"

3. Compound Adjectives:

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ “notably higher range”

   • “less demand-supply mismatch”
     → Những tính từ ghép nâng điểm lexical resource

4. Passive Structure:

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ “was marked between 2 and 10”
     → Cấu trúc bị động nhấn mạnh kết quả chứ không phải chủ thể hành động
     → Dịch: "được ghi nhận trong khoảng từ 2 đến 10"

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