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Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In many parts of world, children are given more freedom than in the past. Is this a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Thi máy 20/4/2022).
I. Đề bài
The two pie charts show the percentages of pollutant entering a particular part of ocean in 1997 and 2007.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- The pollution from domestic sewage, pollutants from air and offshore oil increased while there was a drop in the amount of other pollution. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "while" tiếng anh
- Body 1: Viết về số liệu tăng:
- Offshore oil: …% of pollution was from offshore oil in 2007, which was about three times the 1997 figure.
- Domestic sewage: The figure for domestic sewage entering the ocean increased significantly, from…% to…% during the 10-year period. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "period" tiếng anh
- Pollutants from air: The pollutants from air were approximately the same at about… in both given years.
- Body 2: Viết về số liệu giảm:
- Litter: The pollution from litter accounted for …% in 1997; however, it is interesting to note that there was no litter in this part of ocean in 2007. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Paraphrase "ACCOUNT FOR" & "HAVE"
- Industrial waste & Marine transport waste: Industrial waste and marine saw a fall of…% and …% during this period.
- Farm waste: The percentage of pollutants from far waste declined from…% to…% in ten years time.
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