🔥Phân tích"The pie charts below show the main reasons why students chose to study at a particular UK University in 1987 and 2007"IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi computer 10/7/2022)- Bài mẫu, kèm dịch & giải thích từ vựng & cấu trúc grammar khó

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The pie charts below show the main reasons why students chose to study at a particular UK University in 1987 and 2007"IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi computer 10/7/2022)

The pie charts below show the main reasons why students chose to study at a particular UK University in 1987 and 2007

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  • Overall:
    • Having suitable degree courses remained the most important issue when it came to college preference (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the suitable degree courses were the most concerning reason in both years)
    • While the distance to their parent’s house was the least concern in 1987, it surprisingly became the second most important factor to study at a UK university in 2007.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  PHÂN BIỆT "REMAIN & RETAIN" TIẾNG ANH
  • Body 1: Viết về số liệu tăng
    • In 1987, the proportion of students choosing a university for having suitable degree courses experienced slight growth from 35% to 37% over the next two decades.
    • The percentage of students who preferred to choose a university that was near to their parents’ houses doubled from 10% to 20% over the period.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng prefer, would prefer, would rather, had better
  • Body 2: Viết về số liệu giảm
    • The figure for quality of resources, which was the second most common reason in the first year; however, dropped mildly by 4% to 17%. 
    • Students tended to care less about the sport and recreational activities that were provided, with a considerable drop from 19% to 6%, which became the least popular reason for choosing a university in 2007.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "recreation" tiếng anh
    • The percentage of students who were concerned with the quality of professors almost halved, dropping from 15% to 8% during the examined period.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The pie charts compare the primary motivations (main reasons – động lực chính) for students selecting a particular UK university in 1987 and 2007.

Overall, while having appropriate academic programmes (suitable degree courses – chương trình học phù hợp) remained the most influential factor, the proximity to family residence (closeness to parents’ house – sự gần gũi với nơi ở của gia đình) witnessed a remarkable surge. Meanwhile, leisure-related facilities (sports and recreational amenities – cơ sở vật chất giải trí) became significantly less important.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

In 1987, 37% of students were drawn by (attracted by – bị thu hút bởi) relevant degree options, slightly up from 35% two decades earlier. Notably, the proportion of students choosing universities near their parents’ homes doubled from 10% to 20%, indicating a growing concern for familial convenience (ease related to family matters – sự tiện lợi liên quan đến gia đình).

Conversely, the percentage prioritising top-tier resources (high-quality learning equipment – trang thiết bị học tập chất lượng cao) dropped modestly from 21% to 17%. Interest in extracurricular facilities plummeted (dropped sharply – giảm mạnh) from 19% to just 6%, making it the least cited reason by 2007. Similarly, concern for academic staff excellence (quality of professors – chất lượng giảng viên) almost halved, declining from 15% to 8%.

🔄 Synonyms & Antonyms for Selected Vocabulary (from the essay)

1. Plummeted

• Synonyms: dropped, declined, collapsed

• Antonyms: rose, increased, surged

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Interest in extracurricular facilities plummeted from 19% to just 6%...

2. Primary motivations

• Synonyms: main reasons, key drivers, leading factors

• Antonyms: minor concerns, secondary reasons, trivial factors

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: ...compare the primary motivations for students...

3. Drawn by

• Synonyms: attracted by, interested in, lured by

• Antonyms: repelled by, indifferent to, uninterested in

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: ...37% of students were drawn by relevant degree options...

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