Bên cạnh Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8/2020 [Audio+Transcript], IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Thi giấy 23/4/2022).
I. Đề bài
The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
III. Phân tích
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- Although there was an increase in the consumption / intake of fruit and vegetable until 2006, afterwards, the numbers started declining. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "afterwards" trong tiếng anh
- While women had a tendency to consume these foods the most, the group who ate the least amount of fruit and vegetable was children (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: women consumed more nutritious food, followed by men, while children consumed the least amount / quantity of fruit and vegetables)
- Body 1: Viết về Men & Women
- The smallest figure for both women and men, which was nearly the same as the 2010 figures, was recorded in 2002 (nêu số liệu) >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt "almost" & "nearly" tiếng anh
- The highest figure for women was 32% in 2006 compared to 28% of men in the same year.
- 2010 witnessed the second highest rank for both women and men’s figures, with 27% of women consuming fruit and vegetables, and the percentage of men was 24%. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "witness" tiếng anh
- Body 2: Viết về Children
- The smallest percentage of people consuming the daily recommended amount of fruit and vegetables was children with only 11% in 2002, half as much as that of men and women in the same year.
- The figure for children slightly increased to 16% in 2006 before falling marginally to 14% in the last year.
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