🔥Phân tích"The line graph illustrates the proportion of total expenditure in a certain European country between 1960 and 2000"IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi 10/04/2020 & 21/4/2025)- Bài mẫu, kèm dịch & giải thích từ vựng & cấu trúc grammar khó

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The line graph illustrates the proportion of total expenditure in a certain European country between 1960 and 2000"IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi 10/04/2020).

The line graph illustrates the proportion of total expenditure in a certain European country between 1960 and 2000 (Đề thi 10/04/2020)

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  • Overall: 
    • Almost every category witnessed a downward trend in the spending except clothing.
    • The figure for food underwent the most dramatic downturn.
  • Body 1: Các category có xu hướng giảm (Food + Leisure + Transport + Fuel)
    • Food >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ Vựng Topic Food IELTS
      • Standing at the highest point (32%) in 1960, the spending on food declined gradually year by year and at the end of the period, the figure concluded at approximately 14%. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: In 1960, roughly 35% was spent on food, ranking first among the five classifications surveyed) >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt within / without/ between / among & middle 
    • Leisure >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng & ideas topic "free time/leisure time" IELTS 
      • The rate of money spent on leisure ranked the second at 20% in 1960 before going down steadily until 1980 >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "till" "untill" tiếng anh
      • The remaining time observed a notable drop in the data (nêu số liệu + năm) and it ended at 13% in 2000 >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "datum" và "data" tiếng anh
    • Transport + Fuel
      • The gap between the figures for transport and energy was 5% in 1960  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Allocations for fuel/energy were insignificant, accounting for only 5%) >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng topic Energy IELTS
      • Throughout the time show, both of them experienced a stable decrease and seemed to keep the same level of difference with the spending on transport and energy being 5% and 1%, respectively.
  • Body 2: Clothing (có xu hướng tăng)
    • Only the data for clothing rose with the initial point being under 10% in 1960 which surpassed food in 1998 to become the section spent the most, at 15%.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The line graph depicts the proportion of total spending across five categories in a European country from 1960 to 2000.

Overall, while most categories experienced a long-term decline (long-term = dài hạn) in expenditure, clothing was the only sector showing a marked increase (marked = rõ ràng, đáng kể). The spending on food underwent the most significant drop.

In 1960, food accounted for a substantial share (substantial = đáng kể) at 32%, but this figure plummeted (plummet = giảm mạnh, đột ngột) to roughly 14% by 2000. Similarly, spending on leisure activities (leisure activities = hoạt động giải trí) started at 20% and saw a steady fall to 13%. Transport and fuel/energy also followed downward trajectories (downward trajectory = xu hướng giảm), with transport falling from 9% to 5% and fuel from 5% to just 1%.

In contrast, expenditure on clothing-related items steadily rose from under 10% in 1960 to 15% by 2000, overtaking (overtake = vượt qua) food in the late 1990s to become the category with the highest allocation of spending.

🔁 Vocabulary Expansion

Word: plummeted

• Synonyms: dropped, fell sharply, declined steeply

• Antonyms: surged, skyrocketed, climbed

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...but this figure plummeted to roughly 14% by 2000."

🧠 Grammar Highlights and Translations

1. IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: While most categories experienced a long-term decline in expenditure, clothing was the only sector showing a marked increase.
   → Mặc dù hầu hết các hạng mục đều trải qua sự suy giảm dài hạn trong chi tiêu, quần áo là lĩnh vực duy nhất có sự gia tăng rõ rệt.

Complex sentence using "while" as a subordinate clause.

1. IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: In 1960, food accounted for a substantial share at 32%, but this figure plummeted to roughly 14% by 2000.
   → Năm 1960, thực phẩm chiếm phần lớn với 32%, nhưng con số này đã giảm mạnh còn khoảng 14% vào năm 2000.

Past simple + linking contrast (but) + vocabulary for data trends

1. IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: ...overtaking food in the late 1990s to become the category with the highest allocation of spending.
   → Vượt qua thực phẩm vào cuối những năm 1990 để trở thành hạng mục có mức phân bổ chi tiêu cao nhất.

Present participle phrase used for cause/result relationship

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