Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "All education, primary, secondary and further education, should be free to all people and paid for by the government. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.
I. Đề bài
All education, primary, secondary and further education, should be free to all people and paid for by the government. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
It is argued that all levels of education—primary, secondary, and higher—should be completely free and funded by the government. I totally agree with this view, as education is both a basic human right and a long-term investment (đầu tư dài hạn – an extended commitment of resources expected to bring future benefits) in a nation's future.
Firstly, providing universal free education can create a level playing field (sân chơi công bằng – a fair situation where no one has an advantage over others) where every child, regardless of their background, is given equal opportunity to succeed. In many developing countries, access to education remains a luxury reserved for the affluent (xa xỉ dành cho người giàu – something that only wealthy people can afford), leaving countless children behind. When governments fund education, it becomes a powerful social equalizer (công cụ cân bằng xã hội – something that reduces inequality), allowing underprivileged students to climb the social ladder. For instance, in Finland, where education is free at all levels, students consistently outperform peers from countries with fee-paying systems, demonstrating how state-funded schooling (giáo dục do nhà nước tài trợ – education paid for by the government) leads to both equity and excellence.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
Secondly, investing public money in education has far-reaching (sâu rộng – having a wide and significant impact) economic and social benefits. An educated workforce (lực lượng lao động có học thức – workers who are well-trained and knowledgeable) is more innovative, productive, and adaptable to changing job markets. In the long run, this reduces unemployment rates and boosts economic growth. Moreover, education reduces crime, promotes civic participation, and strengthens democracy. These long-lasting ripple effects (hiệu ứng gợn sóng lâu dài – indirect impacts that spread out over time) justify the use of taxpayers' money. After all, an illiterate society will cost the government more in the form of poverty alleviation and crime prevention than what would be spent on upfront educational support (hỗ trợ giáo dục ban đầu – initial funding for education).
In conclusion, I strongly believe that education should be free for all, as it promotes fairness and drives nationwide progress (sự phát triển toàn quốc – development across the entire country).
New Vocabulary (with English & Vietnamese explanation):
Long-term investment – Đầu tư dài hạn – a commitment to resources that provides benefits over time.
Synonyms: strategic commitment, future-focused spending, sustained funding
Antonyms: short-term fix, temporary expense, one-time outlay
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Education is both a basic human right and a long-term investment in a nation's future.”Level playing field – Sân chơi công bằng – a fair environment where everyone has equal opportunities.
Synonyms: equal footing, fair chance, even competition
Antonyms: unfair advantage, uneven ground, discriminatory system
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Providing universal free education can create a level playing field.”Luxury reserved for the affluent – Xa xỉ dành cho người giàu – something only wealthy people can afford.
Synonyms: exclusive privilege, elitist benefit, costly right
Antonyms: basic need, common access, universal right
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Access to education remains a luxury reserved for the affluent.”Social equalizer – Công cụ cân bằng xã hội – a tool or factor that reduces social inequality.
Synonyms: equalizing force, bridging mechanism, leveller
Antonyms: social divider, status separator, hierarchy enforcer
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Education becomes a powerful social equalizer.”State-funded schooling – Giáo dục do nhà nước tài trợ – education paid for by the government.
Synonyms: government-backed education, publicly funded education, tuition-free learning
Antonyms: privately paid schooling, fee-based education, out-of-pocket tuition
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “State-funded schooling leads to both equity and excellence.”Far-reaching – Sâu rộng – having a significant influence or effect.
Synonyms: widespread, broad-impact, sweeping
Antonyms: limited, narrow, short-lived
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Investing public money in education has far-reaching benefits.”Educated workforce – Lực lượng lao động có học thức – a group of skilled and knowledgeable workers.
Synonyms: trained labor force, skilled professionals, knowledge-based staff
Antonyms: unskilled labor, illiterate workers, uninformed staff
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “An educated workforce is more productive and innovative.”Long-lasting ripple effects – Hiệu ứng gợn sóng lâu dài – indirect, enduring impacts from one action.
Synonyms: lasting consequences, sustained outcomes, ongoing impact
Antonyms: brief effect, short-term consequence, temporary result
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “These long-lasting ripple effects justify public spending.”Upfront educational support – Hỗ trợ giáo dục ban đầu – initial investment in education.
Synonyms: initial funding, early investment, front-end support
Antonyms: delayed aid, retroactive funding, late-stage help
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “...than what would be spent on upfront educational support.”Nationwide progress – Sự phát triển toàn quốc – improvement across the country.
Synonyms: national development, countrywide advancement, broad-based growth
Antonyms: regional stagnation, uneven development, localized regression
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “...education promotes fairness and drives nationwide progress.”
Complex Grammar Structures (with examples and translations):
Reduced relative clause:
“Students consistently outperform peers from countries with fee-paying systems.”
→ (Reduced from: “who are from countries that have fee-paying systems”)
→ Học sinh liên tục vượt trội so với các bạn cùng trang lứa đến từ các quốc gia có hệ thống trả phí.Cleft sentence for emphasis:
“What education does is promote fairness and drive nationwide progress.”
→ Điều mà giáo dục làm được là thúc đẩy sự công bằng và phát triển toàn quốc.Conditional structure (Type 2/3 mix):
“An illiterate society will cost the government more than what would be spent on education if it were free.”
→ Một xã hội không biết chữ sẽ khiến chính phủ tốn kém hơn nhiều so với số tiền sẽ được chi nếu giáo dục miễn phí.Passive voice:
“Education should be free and funded by the government.”
→ Giáo dục nên được miễn phí và tài trợ bởi chính phủ.Noun clause as subject:
“That education is a fundamental right is beyond dispute.”
→ Rằng giáo dục là quyền cơ bản là điều không thể tranh cãi.
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