Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The table below shows the percentage of patients saying the service was very good"IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR đạt target 6.5)
I. Đề bài
The table below shows the percentage of patients saying the service was very good.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
III. Phân tích
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- Hospital C performed the most extraordinary as most patients thinked highly of its staff, waiting time, treatment quality and aftercare. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "think" tiếng anh
- Hospital B received the least praise for almost all studied categories.
- Body 1: Viết về Hospital C
- The vast majority of patients (81%) were very satisfied with staff, slightly lower than its treatment quality and aftercare by 3% and 1% respectively while 92% of patients favored its time allocation. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách Paraphrase "I THINK" trong IELTS
- Body 2: Viết về Hospital A+B
- Hospital A:
- Nearly equal number of people were satisfied with treatment and aftercare service at 85% for the former and 83% for the latter.
- While the staff preference was 74%, which was slightly less preferable. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng cấu trúc ĐẢO NGỮ tiếng anh
- Noticeable is that the lowest number of people (46%) were content with its waiting time.
- Hospital B:
- The situation became barely satisfactory with the lowest percentages of respondents enjoying its three aspects of staff, treatment, aftercare service at 38%, 68%, 70%, respectively, except waiting time which gained satisfaction from 53% of patients, which was the second highest number in this category.
- Hospital A:
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