🔥Phân tích"Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society, but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world? How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (đề thi 1/6/2022, 27/2/2024 & 8/3/2025) - Bài mẫu, kèm dịch & giải thích từ vựng & cấu trúc grammar khó​ (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society, but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world? How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (đề thi 1/6/2022 computer-based)

Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society, but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world? How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Lúc này thì mình sẽ nêu ý kiến của bản thân ra về an ideal society. Có thể nêu ngắn gọn 1 main idea, sau đó cho câu explain, rồi cho 1 hoặc 2 ví dụ ra. Hoặc có thể viết 2 main idea, nhưng nhớ phải có câu explain và câu ví dụ
    • Main idea 1: people, regardless of race, ethnicity, and background, unconditionally love one another without hostility and hatred   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng "regardless / regardless of" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: By seeing the world from the eyes of others, we are able to truly understand each other’s hardship, thereby obliterating hatred and giving rise to a utopia where people all live in harmony.
      • Example: In 2004, Australian man Juan Mann initiated the "Free Hugs Project" in Sydney, aiming to provide free hugs as a means to break down barriers, foster understanding, and promote a shared sense of humanity, leading to its global spread and participants gaining a deeper appreciation for human connection and compassion. 
    • Main idea 2: The society is based on fairness  
      • Supporting idea: Equality should be maintained across all social castes or statuses  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "equal" tiếng anh 
      • Example: Iceland is often lauded as a global leader in social equality, consistently ranking high in various indices due to features like universal access to healthcare and education and robust social safety nets, ensuring equal opportunities and a minimum standard of living for all citizens.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?
    • Lúc này bản thân sẽ đưa ra một vài cách để tạo nên một xã hội lí tưởng, có thể cho 2 cách, rồi cũng cho câu giải thích và ví dụ ra.
    • Main idea 1 (liên quan đến main idea 1 của body 1): each person should practice understanding ourselves
      • Supporting idea: Seeing that human beings have flaws and eventually accepting them is the first step towards attaining intrapersonal joy >> Putting oneself in others’ situations, showing simple acts of kindness and actively communicating with others can create an endless ripple of empathy that reaches out to everyone  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "instill" tiếng anh
      • Example: When someone begins learning a new skill, they will inevitably make mistakes. However, by understanding that mistakes are a natural part of the learning process and accepting their imperfections, they can continue to learn and grow.
    • Main idea 2 (liên quan đến main idea 1 của body 2): governments needs to be based on a firm foundation of morality when it is necessary for them to eradicate the irresponsibility, corruption or inequality in their operation    >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "base" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: >> give society a reliable springboard for development 
      • Example: Singapore's remarkable transformation from a developing nation to a global economic hub can be attributed, in part, to its unwavering commitment to ethical governance. The country has consistently ranked high on international corruption indices due to its stringent anti-corruption measures

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Throughout history, individuals have envisioned (hình dung, tưởng tượng) an idyllic (lý tưởng, tuyệt vời) society, yet there has been no unanimous (nhất trí, đồng lòng) consensus on what constitutes this utopia (xã hội hoàn hảo). In the contemporary era, an ideal society should be built on unwavering (kiên định, không dao động) love among individuals and equitable (công bằng, không thiên vị) opportunities for all, while governments and individuals must take proactive steps to achieve this vision.

A quintessential element of a harmonious (hài hoà, không xung đột) society is unconditional (vô điều kiện) love and mutual understanding among people, irrespective of their race, ethnicity, or background. When individuals empathize (thông cảm, đồng cảm) with others' struggles, it obliterates (xoá bỏ, tiêu diệt) hatred and fosters a cohesive (gắn kết, đoàn kết) community. A compelling example is the "Free Hugs Project," initiated by Australian Juan Mann in 2004, which sought to bridge societal divides through simple acts of compassion. Additionally, fairness must be enshrined (bảo đảm, đưa vào luật) as a fundamental pillar, ensuring equal access to resources and opportunities. Countries like Iceland, which champion social equality through universal (toàn diện, phổ quát) healthcare and education, exemplify this principle by providing a safety net for all citizens.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

To materialize this ideal society, individuals must cultivate self-awareness and foster (nuôi dưỡng, khuyến khích) empathy. Recognizing human imperfections (khiếm khuyết, sự thiếu sót) and practicing kindness catalyze (thúc đẩy, xúc tiến) a ripple effect, permeating (lan tỎc, thâm nhậu) society with understanding. For instance, an individual who accepts mistakes as an inherent part of growth becomes more tolerant (khoan dung, bao dung) towards others. Simultaneously, governments must be anchored in ethical governance (quản lý đạo đức) to eradicate corruption, irresponsibility, and systemic (hệ thống, có tổ chức) inequality. Singapore's remarkable transition into a global economic hub underscores the transformative power of stringent (nghiêm ngặt, chặt chẽ) anti-corruption policies in fostering sustainable progress.

In conclusion, an ideal society is one where universal love and fairness reign, achievable through both individual and governmental efforts to cultivate empathy and uphold moral governance.

New Vocabulary 

• Envisioned: Hình dung, tưởng tượng (To imagine or conceive of something in the future)

• Idyllic: Lý tưởng, tuyệt vời (Extremely pleasant, simple, and peaceful)

• Unanimous: Nhất trí, đồng lòng (Fully in agreement, with no dissent)

• Utopia: Xã hội hoàn hảo (An imagined perfect society)

• Unwavering: Kiên định, không dao động (Steady and resolute)

• Equitable: Công bằng, không thiên vị (Fair and impartial)

• Harmonious: Hài hoà, không xung đột (Marked by agreement and cooperation)

• Unconditional: Vô điều kiện (Not limited by any terms)

• Empathize: Thông cảm, đồng cảm (To understand and share others' feelings)

• Obliterates: Xoá bỏ, tiêu diệt (To destroy completely)

• Cohesive: Gắn kết, đoàn kết (Well-integrated, forming a united whole)

• Enshrined: Bảo đảm, đưa vào luật (To preserve as sacred)

• Universal: Toàn diện, phổ quát (Applicable everywhere and to everyone)

• Foster: Nuôi dưỡng, khuyến khích (To encourage the development of)

• Catalyze: Thúc đẩy, xúc tiến (To cause an action or event)

• Permeating: Lan tỎc, thâm nhậu (To spread throughout)

• Tolerant: Khoan dung, bao dung (Willing to accept others' differences)

• Ethical governance: Quản lý đạo đức (Leadership based on morality and fairness)

• Systemic: Hệ thống, có tổ chức (Relating to a system)

• Stringent: Nghiêm ngặt, chặt chẽ (Strict, precise, and exacting)

Synonyms & Antonyms

• Empathize (Sympathize, Understand, Relate // Ignore, Disregard, Misinterpret)

• Equitable (Fair, Impartial, Just // Unfair, Biased, Unequal)

• Cohesive (United, Integrated, Harmonized // Divided, Fragmented, Disjointed)

Advanced Grammar Structures

1. Inversion with negative adverbial

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Never before has the world witnessed such a cohesive effort toward equality. (Chưa bao giờ thế giới chứng kiến một nỗ lực đoàn kết về bình đẳng như vậy.)

2. Relative clauses for complexity

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Singapore, which has maintained its stringent anti-corruption policies, has become a model of ethical governance. (Singapore, nơi duy trì những chính sách chống tham nhũng nghiêm ngặt, đã trở thành hình mẫu về quản lý đạo đức.)

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