Phân tích"Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society, but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world? How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (đề thi 1/6/2022 computer-based & 27/2/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society, but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world? How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (đề thi 1/6/2022 computer-based)

Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society, but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world? How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Lúc này thì mình sẽ nêu ý kiến của bản thân ra về an ideal society. Có thể nêu ngắn gọn 1 main idea, sau đó cho câu explain, rồi cho 1 hoặc 2 ví dụ ra. Hoặc có thể viết 2 main idea, nhưng nhớ phải có câu explain và câu ví dụ
    • Main idea 1: people, regardless of race, ethnicity, and background, unconditionally love one another without hostility and hatred   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng "regardless / regardless of" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: By seeing the world from the eyes of others, we are able to truly understand each other’s hardship, thereby obliterating hatred and giving rise to a utopia where people all live in harmony.
      • Example: In 2004, Australian man Juan Mann initiated the "Free Hugs Project" in Sydney, aiming to provide free hugs as a means to break down barriers, foster understanding, and promote a shared sense of humanity, leading to its global spread and participants gaining a deeper appreciation for human connection and compassion. 
    • Main idea 2: The society is based on fairness  
      • Supporting idea: Equality should be maintained across all social castes or statuses  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "equal" tiếng anh 
      • Example: Iceland is often lauded as a global leader in social equality, consistently ranking high in various indices due to features like universal access to healthcare and education and robust social safety nets, ensuring equal opportunities and a minimum standard of living for all citizens.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?
    • Lúc này bản thân sẽ đưa ra một vài cách để tạo nên một xã hội lí tưởng, có thể cho 2 cách, rồi cũng cho câu giải thích và ví dụ ra.
    • Main idea 1 (liên quan đến main idea 1 của body 1): each person should practice understanding ourselves
      • Supporting idea: Seeing that human beings have flaws and eventually accepting them is the first step towards attaining intrapersonal joy >> Putting oneself in others’ situations, showing simple acts of kindness and actively communicating with others can create an endless ripple of empathy that reaches out to everyone  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "instill" tiếng anh
      • Example: When someone begins learning a new skill, they will inevitably make mistakes. However, by understanding that mistakes are a natural part of the learning process and accepting their imperfections, they can continue to learn and grow.
    • Main idea 2 (liên quan đến main idea 1 của body 2): governments needs to be based on a firm foundation of morality when it is necessary for them to eradicate the irresponsibility, corruption or inequality in their operation    >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "base" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: >> give society a reliable springboard for development 
      • Example: Singapore's remarkable transformation from a developing nation to a global economic hub can be attributed, in part, to its unwavering commitment to ethical governance. The country has consistently ranked high on international corruption indices due to its stringent anti-corruption measures

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