Phân tích "Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Why?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(ĐỀ THI 21/10/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8/2020 [Audio+Transcript], IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Why?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(ĐỀ THI 21/10/2023)

Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Why?

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• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng negative):
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao negative (Viết về work)
    • Main idea: The delegation of various mechanical tasks to robots is likely to give rise to greater unemployment figures.
    • Supporting idea:  In the workplace, especially in manufacturing, millions of workers worldwide, particularly unskilled ones, would lose their jobs to cutting-edge robotic systems.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: Currently, large numbers of manual workers are being replaced by cutting-edge robotics systems in numerous factories around the world)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic "Work" IELTS 
    • Example: 
      • For example, fully automated processes have already taken over monotonous jobs such as assembly-line workers or bank tellers in many developed countries such as the United States.
      • For instance, thousands of Chinese assembly workers at FoxConn, a major manufacturer of Apple products, have recently been made redundant after the company adopted a fully automated process that minimizes the need for a skilled and unskilled human labor supply.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic "Study" IELTS
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao negative (Viết về home)
    • Main idea: The growth of a robotics industry exacerbates a modern trend towards isolation. 
    • Supporting idea: 
      • As robotics and automation take on more tasks traditionally performed by humans, individuals may spend less time engaging in social activities outside the home. 
      • This can lead to decreased face-to-face interactions, potentially contributing to feelings of isolation and loneliness.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Example: Imagine a world where robots and automation have taken over many of the tasks that are currently performed by humans. In this world, with robots and automation handling tasks like delivering groceries, cleaning homes, and providing customer service, people may have reduced in-person interactions, opting for online shopping, robotic housekeeping, and chatbot communication for customer support.

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