Phân tích "Scientists tell us some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that million of people continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes and what are the solutions?​" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi computer-based 28.11.2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Scientists tell us some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that million of people continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes and what are the solutions?​" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi computer-based 28.11.2022)

Scientists tell us some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that million of people continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes and what are the solutions?

• Dạng 2 question thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: The hectic pace of contemporary life attributes to unhealthy lifestyles. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • This fast pace of life requires us to work much harder and longer hours, thus ignoring a crucial part of life – that is our health. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "require" tiếng anh
        • The pressure and importance of their work often force them to neglect proper eating, sleeping, and daily exercise, which is absolutely essential to maintaining sound health.
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Once people are addicted to unhealthy habits, it is very difficult for them to break.
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: For example, people with smoking habits cannot reduce their dependency on cigarettes due to their high addictiveness, or people with sedentary lifestyles are unable to bring themselves to be more active on the simple grounds that exercises are not pleasurable.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: Healthy lifestyles should be further promoted, and likewise, unhealthy lifestyles should be strictly criticised on the media. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng trạng từ "likewise" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: With a sense of self-protection and knowledge that everybody around them practices the same habit, I believe that people would find it easier to break their old self-destructive lifestyles. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "habit" & Collocation với "habit"
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: This tendency to indulge in deleterious actions can be eliminated through self-control, strong will power and support of near and dear ones.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • People should seek the companionship of family and friends to release their stress and tensions rather than consuming alcohol or cigarettes. 
        • This will strengthen their determination and gradually they will reduce the use of liquor or other narcotic substances. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ "reduce" tiếng anh 
      • Example: 
  • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý main idea khác:
    • Main idea: governments should also take steps to break bad habits. 
    • For instance, they ought to introduce laws to limit maximum working hours so that people can achieve a better work-life balance. >> IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp Từ vựng topic "Work-life balance" IELTS 

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