Phân tích"In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which of these two systems is more appropriate in today's world?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which of these two systems is more appropriate in today's world?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which of these two systems is more appropriate in today's world?

    II. Kiến thức liên quan

    IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:

    III. Phân tích

    1. Nếu ủng hộ quan điểm"secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a range of subjects"

    IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

    • Opinion essay, nhớ là đề ghi secondary schools nên nếu ghi vào bài là tertertiary hoặc university là sai đề.
    • Sẽ đi theo hướng totally agree general education across a range of subjects.
    • Intro câu 2 & conclusion khẳng định quan điểm totally agree general education across a range of subjects.
    • Body 1: Lí do số 1 vì sao totally agree general education across a range of subjects.
      • Main idea: General education across a range of subjects is likely to develop the comprehensive thinking of children. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý phân biệt "unlike, unlikely, alike, likely & like" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: they seem to be too young to decide on a specific occupation to follow at that age.
      • Example: secondary schools in the UK aim to teach children different subjects ranging from math to arts, and their educational philosophy is to put job orientation in the high school curriculum.
    • Body 2: Lí do số 2 vì sao totally agree general education across a range of subjects.
      • Main idea: Those who learn a range of subjects in secondary school can be more capable and competitive once they enter the highly competitive workplace. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: If students have access to a wide diversity of subjects in middle school and high school, they can become quite knowledgeable) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng tính từ "knowledgeable" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Our society is advancing at such an unprecedented pace that many professions that prevail today are forecast to vanish in the near future >> That poses a multitude of challenges to the younger generation who will survive only if they are equipped with a wealth of knowledge in a variety of domains. 
        • Learning multiple principles from science to languages helps them gain substantial amounts of information, thus facilitating the acquisition of knowledge in various areas >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ"learn"tiếng anh 
      • Example: 

    2. Nếu ủng hộ quan điểm"children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular caree"

    IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

      • Nếu ủng hộ quan điểm children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career có thể tham khảo các main idea sau cùng IELTS TUTOR:
        • Main idea 1: Being exposed to expertise and skills required by a certain speciality at the young age, the students would stand a great chance to not only have a well-defined career path but also become competent workers in their later life.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   Cách dùng động từ "focus" tiếng anh
          • Supporting idea: 
          • Example: For example, with students having ambition to work as translators or applied language researchers in the future, it is a course of basic grammar and vocabulary at their secondary school that can realise the dream.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ"ambition"tiếng anh
        • Main idea 2: current society of specialization tends to favour employees with a good grounding in a single field over those who have general knowledge but are not experts in a particular area  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "favour" tiếng anh
          • Supporting idea: it is absurd to say that such career-driven programmes are not appropriate to today's world.
          • Example: 

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