Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that the user should cover the costs. Discuss both view and give your opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.
I. Đề bài
As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that the user should cover the costs. Discuss both view and give your opinion
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Dạng discuss both views & give your opinion
- Intro câu 2 & conclusion: khẳng định ủng hộ quan điểm số 2 (user should cover the costs)
- Body 1: View 1
- Main idea 1: Tax collected from a country’s citizens should be used to serve the community, in particular road system >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng topic "community" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- Example: People in Vietnam have to pay almost twice as much to own a car than in other countries since taxes and fees account for 40-50% of car prices >> it is better to use these taxes for road infrastructure investment, rather than forcing citizens to pay for it.
- Main idea 2: The main role of governments is to improve the citizens’ standard of living, and an efficient transportation system is just one of the residents’ basic needs.
- Supporting idea: The efficiency in road transport is the backbone of a country’s economy, and therefore it would be wrong if governments did not give this top priority. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "efficiency" tiếng anh
- Example:
- Main idea 1: Tax collected from a country’s citizens should be used to serve the community, in particular road system >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng topic "community" tiếng anh
- Body 2: View 2 (ủng hộ quan điểm này)
- Main idea 1: The principal reason why car commuters should take the responsibility for these costs stems from their overuse of roads.
- Supporting idea:
- Compared to other means of transport like a motorcycle, a car obviously not only occupies much more road space, but also wears the roads more due to its larger size and weight >> IETLS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng in comparison with / compared to / with
- The need for the expansion and enhancement of roads is mainly to facilitate a more comfortable journey for car users >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "journey" tiếng anh
- It is reasonable to assign the costs to car owners to pay for the maintenance and enhancement of the infrastructure >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "assign" tiếng anh
- Example:
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 2: Users’ responsibility for paying for road systems discourages their desire for driving.
- Supporting idea:
- The reduction in the emission of exhausted fumes from private vehicles.
- Less air pollution >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Paraphrase "air pollution"
- Example:
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 1: The principal reason why car commuters should take the responsibility for these costs stems from their overuse of roads.
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