Phân tích "Some countries have an ever-increasing proportion of population who are aged 15 and younger. What is your opinion of the current and future effects it may have in those countries?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích ''Some countries have an ever-increasing proportion of population who are aged 15 and younger. What is your opinion of the current and future effects it may have in those countries?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some countries have an ever-increasing proportion of population who are aged 15 and younger. What is your opinion of the current and future effects it may have in those countries?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về current effects (A high proportion of young people can have both positive and negative effects on a country)
    • Main idea 1: On the one hand, young people represent the future of a country and can bring energy, creativity, and innovation to the workforce.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng "represent" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: They will be the ones who will be taking on leadership roles, making decisions, and driving the country's development and progress.
    • Main idea 2: On the other hand, countries with a high proportion of young people may struggle to provide enough resources and infrastructure to support their education needs. 
      • Supporting idea: This can lead to overcrowded classrooms, lack of qualified teachers, and inadequate learning materials.
  • Body 2: Viết về future effects  
    • Main idea 1: The rise in the number of young people will lead to unemployment in the future.
      • Supporting idea: if there are not enough job opportunities or resources to support their education and healthcare needs, it can lead to poverty, social unrest, and even political instability.
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: A high youth population can also lead to social and cultural changes, as young people tend to be more open to new ideas and ways of thinking.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase từ "lead to/cause" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: This can lead to shifts in social norms and values, as well as changes in cultural practices and traditions.

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