Phân tích "Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 3/9/2022 (computer-based)

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 20/8/2022 (computer-based))

I. Đề bài

Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
  • Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished.
      • Main idea 1: Despite the fact that some parents nurture their kids with care and attention, some kids get involved in crimes, due to bad mental health.
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: Due to financial and social obligations, many parents do not have much time to keep an eye on kids all time. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "obligation" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 
      • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý ideas khác:
        • Main idea: Just because loving parents can raise their child well does not mean social problems cannot manifest from a young age. 
        • Supporting idea: This is often the case if the child suffers from a mental illness such as schizophrenia or a dissociative disorder. >> IELTS TUTOR Giài thích suffer from (something) 
    • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Others think the parents should be punished instead & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
      • Main idea 1: most young children who commit crimes have been abused in some way by their parents.
        • Supporting idea: 
        • Example: There are also no known examples of serial killers coming from happy homes; they are all the product of varying degrees of abuse from their parents.
      • Main idea 2: For young children, parents are chiefly responsible
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Since children have not fully developed their mental faculties, that behaviours performed by them must be copied from their parents.
          • Parents that teach their kids anti social behaviour therefore shoulder some of the blame for their child misbehaving >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Paraphrase từ "parents" tiếng anh
        • Example: 

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