Phân tích "Some people feel that the cost of space exploration is far too high for the benefits it brings while others argue that space programmes should continue no matter what the cost. Discuss both sides and give your opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people feel that the cost of space exploration is far too high for the benefits it brings while others argue that space programmes should continue no matter what the cost. Discuss both sides and give your opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

Some people feel that the cost of space exploration is far too high for the benefits it brings while others argue that space programmes should continue no matter what the cost. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
  • Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people feel that the cost of space exploration is far too high for the benefits it brings 
      • Main idea: it costs their countries billions of dollars to recruit, train and pay for astronomers as well as the research teams while there are not any clear benefits for ordinary people
        • Supporting idea: 
          • They argue that it would be more practical to spend the money on essential sectors such as education, health care and transportation to raise the citizens’ living standards.
          • Human beings on Earth are facing severe issues, such as famine, natural disasters, pollution or terrorism, which require immediate action.
          • If the money were reallocated to solve these problems, a large number of human lives would be saved. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý cách Paraphrase từ "solve" tiếng anh
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm others argue that space programmes should continue no matter what the cost & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
      • Main idea 1:  the advanced technology which has been developed and used in space exploration does have practical applications in our daily lives >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng tính từ "practical" 
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 
          • A great example is GPS, which is used as the fundamental system to develop many applications in taxi and delivery services such as Uber or Grab.
          • Satellites sent to the space can observe what is happening on Earth, and therefore, can provide highly accurate forecasts about the weather and more importantly, the potential occurrence of natural disasters such as typhoons or devastating storms. Without these forecasts, a considerable number of human lives would be at risk each year.
      • Main idea 2: Thanks to space exploration programs we are discovering many things that help us understand the universe. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "universe" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: 
        • Example: For instance, learning about planets, comets, stars, etc. can help us find solutions for some of the problems our civilization will face, such as overpopulation and the need to colonize other planets. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "solution" tiếng anh
      • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm các ý khác:
        • Main idea: space exploration has opened up new opportunities that may solve some pre-existing energy problems on Earth better than many other energy technologies.
        • Supporting idea: 
        • Example: The depletion of fossil fuels, for example, can be well-addressed by a space technology called space-based solar power, which has been proven to be far more efficient than traditional solar cells, because in space no incoming solar energy is lost by reflection and absorption.

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