Phân tích & sửa đề"Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country’s success while others think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country’s success"IELTS WRITING

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Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country’s success while others think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country’s success. What are these factors? And among them, which one is more important than others.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Với dạng 2 question này phân bố bố cục như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi What other factors should also be considered when measuring a country's success?
    • Main idea 1:
      • Supporting idea: A good education system is vital for the development of any nation >> Schools, colleges and universities bear the responsibility for the quality of future generations of workers I  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ Vựng Topic Education / WORK IELTS 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2:
      • Supporting idea: Healthcare provision is also an indicator of the standard of living within a country >> This can be measured by looking at average life expectancy rates or availability of medical services   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic Health / Health care / Medicine IELTS
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi Do you think one factor is more important than others?
    • Main idea: a country’s education system should be seen as the most important indicator of its success and level of development.
      • Supporting idea: Education has a considerable effect on the other two factors mentioned above. 
        • It affects people’s health in the sense that doctors and nurses need to be trained, and scientists need to be educated to the highest levels before they can carry out medical research.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "effect" tiếng anh
        • It also affects the economy in the sense that a well-educated workforce will allow a variety of companies and industries to flourish, leading to trade with other countries, and increased wealth.
      • Example: 

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