Phân tích đề"Space travel has been possible for some time and some people believe that space tourism could be developed in the future" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 28/10/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích đề"Space travel has been possible for some time and some people believe that space tourism could be developed in the future" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Space travel has been possible for some time and some people believe that space tourism could be developed in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Nếu  theo hướng it is a positive development có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body  1: Lí  do  thứ  1 vì  sao  theo  mình  lại là  "positive development"  
    • Main idea: Space  tourism is a new type of travelling, allowing  people  to  know more about the universe (HOẶC: Space  tourism can provide new chances for tourists to experience new adventures / discover alien life forms / explore new living space / find a new extraterrestrial life)   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "allow" tiếng anh 
    • Supporting  idea: Floating through space and living in conditions of zero gravity make people excited and amused (HOẶC: This type of traveling could help them enrich their knowledge about the universe, such as the geographic and climate conditions of other planets and discover other mysteries about the space)   >> IELTS  TUTOR   hướng dẫn từ a đến z cách dùng từ "make" trong ielts writing
    • Example: 
      • In 2018, Elon Musk's SpaceX launched a Falcon Heavy rocket into space, carrying a Tesla Roadster with a mannequin named "Starman" at the wheel. The car and driver were photographed floating through space, and the images quickly went viral. People were amazed and amused by the sight of a car floating through space, and it sparked a renewed interest in space travel.
      • Many astronauts have described the feeling of floating in space as "liberating" and "exhilarating." They say that it feels like they are weightless and can move around in any direction. This can be a lot of fun, and it can also be a great way to relieve stress.
  • Body  2: Lí  do  thứ  2 vì  sao  theo  mình  lại là  "positive development"   
    • Main idea: More job opportunities would be created in order to meet the increasing demand of space tourism, and this can reduce the unemployment rate in the future.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "reduction" tiếng anh
    • Supporting  idea: When space traveling companies generate more revenues from tourists, they can pay more taxes for national budget so that the governments can upgrade other public infrastructures and services >> can contribute to the betterment of whole society >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Example: Virgin Galactic is a private space tourism company that offers suborbital flights to paying customers. In 2021, Virgin Galactic generated $55 million in revenue from ticket sales. This revenue was taxed by the United States government, and the company paid $11 million in taxes

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