Phân tích"Some people think that government should provide assistance to all kinds of artists, while some others think it is a waste of money. What is your opinion?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 03/6/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that government should provide assistance to all kinds of artists, while some others think it is a waste of money. What is your opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 03/6/2023)

Some people think that government should provide assistance to all kinds of artists, while some others think it is a waste of money. What is your opinion?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE với quan điểm ”Allocating public funds to support artists across all disciplines is a wasteful expenditure” có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: The government operates with limited financial resources that should be allocated judiciously to address critical areas such as healthcare, education, and infrastructure development. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Funding the arts, while undoubtedly important for cultural enrichment, cannot take precedence over these fundamental necessities. 
        • Limited resources should be channeled towards areas that directly impact the welfare and well-being of the general population. >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Word form của từ "well-being" tiếng anh
      • Example: For example, imagine a scenario where a government is facing a shortage of healthcare facilities and medical professionals, resulting in long waiting times and inadequate access to healthcare services for its citizens. In such a situation, it would be more prudent to allocate additional resources to improve the healthcare system, hire more doctors, and enhance medical infrastructure, rather than directing funds towards supporting artists. 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Artists, like individuals in any profession, should bear the responsibility of ensuring their own financial sustainability. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "individual" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Encouraging self-reliance fosters a sense of entrepreneurship and accountability, pushing artists to explore diverse avenues to support their craft. 
        • Relying on government handouts undermines the value of personal effort and resilience, ultimately hindering the growth and development of artists as independent creators.
      • Example: For example, self-employed artists are responsible for promoting and selling their artwork, participating in exhibitions, and engaging with potential buyers through various channels such as online platforms, galleries, and commissions.

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