Phân tích"Some people think that it is a waste of money for countries to host big sporting events like the world cup, and that the money would be better spent on other things. However, others think that hosting large sporting events has a clear, positive impact on a country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 24/5/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that it is a waste of money for countries to host big sporting events like the world cup, and that the money would be better spent on other things. However, others think that hosting large sporting events has a clear, positive impact on a country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 24/5/2023)

Some people think that it is a waste of money for countries to host big sporting events like the world cup, and that the money would be better spent on other things. However, others think that hosting large sporting events has a clear, positive impact on a country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that it is a waste of money for countries to host big sporting events like the world cup, and that the money would be better spent on other things.
    • Main idea 1: They contend that the short-term benefits of hosting the event, such as increased tourism and publicity, do not outweigh the long-term financial burden. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • While there might be an initial surge in tourism during the event, this influx of visitors is typically temporary and may not provide sustained economic growth in the long run.
      • Example: 
        • One real example illustrating the overestimated economic impact of hosting a major sporting event is the 2014 FIFA World Cup in Brazil, where the government's substantial investments in stadium construction and transportation improvements did not yield the expected economic benefits >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"improvement"tiếng anh
        • But after the event, studies found that the returns were lower than expected with many stadiums not fully used afterward and becoming costly to maintain.
    • Main idea 2: The exorbitant costs associated with organizing such events could be better allocated to address pressing issues such as healthcare, education, or infrastructure development
      • Supporting idea: This have a more direct and long-lasting impact on the well-being and development of the country. >> IELT TUTOR Phân biệt cách dùng impact như động từ & danh từ
      • Example: 
        • One real example of how the costs of hosting a major sporting event could be better allocated is the case of the 2016 Rio Olympics in Brazil. 
        • After the Olympics, Brazil faced economic challenges and issues in healthcare, education, and infrastructure, which could have been addressed more effectively with the resources spent on hosting the event.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm However, others think that hosting large sporting events has a clear, positive impact on a country.  & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Hosting major sporting events can bring substantial economic benefits to a country. 
      • Supporting idea: The influx of tourists and international visitors can stimulate local businesses, boost the hospitality industry, and create job opportunities. 
      • Example: Hosting major sporting events, like the 2012 London Olympics, can bring in many tourists and boost local businesses, such as hotels, restaurants, and shops, leading to more job opportunities in the hospitality industry.
    • Main idea 2: Additionally, the event can enhance a country's global image, attract foreign investment, and provide a platform for cultural exchange and international cooperation.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • It allows the host nation to showcase its infrastructure, hospitality, and organizational capabilities, which can improve its reputation on the world stage. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "showcase" tiếng anh
        • The successful management of such events can instill confidence in potential investors, encouraging them to consider the country for business opportunities.
      • Example: The 2008 Beijing Olympics in China showcased China's economic development, modern infrastructure, and organizational capabilities to the world. 

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