🔥Phân tích "Some people think that schools should stop teaching students by using books, because students find them boring and that children can learn from films, TV, video games and computer instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?'' IELTS Writing Task 2 - Kèm bài mẫu + giải thích từ vựng

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 "Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that schools should stop teaching students by using books, because students find them boring and that children can learn from films, TV, video games and computer instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people think that schools should stop teaching students by using books, because students find them boring and that children can learn from films, TV, video games and computer instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Learning from books improves cognitive abilities and develop the imagination rapidly which is vital especially in early school years. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "Ability" 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Reading books exposes children to a rich variety of words, which helps in expanding their vocabulary. 
        • A robust vocabulary is linked to better comprehension and communication skills.
      • Example: A 2019 study published in the journal Child Development investigated the link between book reading and vocabulary development in preschoolers, dividing children into two groups: one that participated in regular story time sessions and another that did not.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: only by using books children can learn handwriting which is an essential part of learning.
      • Supporting idea: This is crucial for strengthening small hand muscles that are used in complicated and precise tasks later on in life.
      • Example: For instance, a 2020 research paper published in the journal Frontiers in Psychology investigated the link between fine motor skills and mathematical abilities in elementary school children, finding that those with better fine motor skills demonstrated stronger performance in math tasks involving spatial reasoning and manipulating objects.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Some argue that traditional books should be eliminated from schools in favor of more engaging forms of media such as films, television, video games, and computers. However, I totally disagree with this view, as books play an irreplaceable role in fostering children's mental development and essential skills.

Firstly, reading books enhances cognitive abilities and develops the imagination, which is particularly vital in early education. Exposure to written texts introduces learners to a rich vocabulary and a wide range of sentence structures, thereby sharpening linguistic competence (năng lực ngôn ngữ – linguistic competence). A robust vocabulary (vốn từ vựng vững chắc – strong and varied vocabulary) is closely associated with better understanding and articulate expression. For instance, a 2019 study published in Child Development demonstrated that preschoolers who attended regular story-reading sessions outperformed their peers in vocabulary growth and reading comprehension. Clearly, books are a time-tested educational medium (phương tiện giáo dục đã được kiểm chứng theo thời gian – proven method of education) that builds foundational language skills in a way that visual media cannot match.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

Secondly, books facilitate handwriting, a skill that is often neglected in screen-based learning. Handwriting instruction (hướng dẫn viết tay – manual writing education) is critical for developing fine motor skills (kỹ năng vận động tinh – precise hand movements), which support tasks requiring accuracy and control later in life. A 2020 study in Frontiers in Psychology found that children with stronger motor skills had significantly better performance in mathematics tasks involving spatial reasoning and object manipulation. These results highlight the indispensable role (vai trò không thể thiếu – essential function) of writing by hand, something that digital platforms seldom encourage or develop.

In conclusion, although digital media offer alternative ways to learn, books remain fundamental in nurturing both language development and motor coordination, and should never be replaced.

🔍 New Vocabulary with Definitions:

1. Enhances cognitive abilities – cải thiện khả năng nhận thức – improves mental processes such as memory, attention, and problem-solving

2. Sharpening linguistic competence – nâng cao năng lực ngôn ngữ – improving one’s ability to use language effectively

3. Robust vocabulary – vốn từ vựng phong phú – a wide and strong range of vocabulary

4. A time-tested educational medium – phương tiện giáo dục đã được kiểm chứng theo thời gian – a reliable and proven form of teaching

5. Handwriting instruction – hướng dẫn viết tay – teaching students how to write manually

6. Fine motor skills – kỹ năng vận động tinh – the coordination of small muscles in movements

7. Indispensable role – vai trò không thể thiếu – a function that is absolutely necessary

8. Fundamental – cơ bản – essential and foundational

🔄 Vocabulary Synonyms and Antonyms

1. "Enhances cognitive abilities"

• Synonyms: improves mental skills, boosts intellectual growth, stimulates brain function

• Antonyms: impairs cognition, hinders thinking, weakens understanding

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Reading books enhances cognitive abilities and develops the imagination..."

2. "Robust vocabulary"

• Synonyms: strong vocabulary, broad lexicon, rich word stock

• Antonyms: limited vocabulary, poor word knowledge, narrow lexicon

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "A robust vocabulary is closely associated with better understanding..."

3. "Indispensable role"

• Synonyms: crucial function, essential part, vital duty

• Antonyms: trivial role, optional aspect, non-essential task

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "These results highlight the indispensable role of writing by hand..."

🧠 Advanced Grammar Structures and Vietnamese Translation

1. Relative clause

   • "which is particularly vital in early education."

   • → mà điều này đặc biệt quan trọng trong giáo dục ban đầu.

2. Present participle clause

   • "Exposure to written texts introducing learners to a rich vocabulary..."

   • → Việc tiếp xúc với văn bản viết giúp người học tiếp cận với vốn từ vựng phong phú...

3. Passive voice

   • "A 2020 study... found that children with stronger motor skills were significantly better..."

   • → Một nghiên cứu năm 2020... phát hiện rằng trẻ có kỹ năng vận động tốt hơn đã thể hiện vượt trội hơn...

4. Complex noun phrases

   • "A time-tested educational medium that builds foundational language skills..."

   • → Một phương tiện giáo dục đã được kiểm chứng theo thời gian giúp xây dựng kỹ năng ngôn ngữ nền tảng...

5. Conditional-like structure (although...still...)

   • "Although digital media offer alternative ways to learn, books remain fundamental..."

   • → Mặc dù phương tiện kỹ thuật số cung cấp cách học thay thế, sách vẫn là nền tảng...

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