Phân tích "Some people think that schools should stop teaching students by using books, because students find them boring and that children can learn from films, TV, video games and computer instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?'' IELTS Writing Task 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 "Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that schools should stop teaching students by using books, because students find them boring and that children can learn from films, TV, video games and computer instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people think that schools should stop teaching students by using books, because students find them boring and that children can learn from films, TV, video games and computer instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Learning from books improves cognitive abilities and develop the imagination rapidly which is vital especially in early school years. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "Ability" 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Reading books exposes children to a rich variety of words, which helps in expanding their vocabulary. 
        • A robust vocabulary is linked to better comprehension and communication skills.
      • Example: A 2019 study published in the journal Child Development investigated the link between book reading and vocabulary development in preschoolers, dividing children into two groups: one that participated in regular story time sessions and another that did not.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: only by using books children can learn handwriting which is an essential part of learning.
      • Supporting idea: This is crucial for strengthening small hand muscles that are used in complicated and precise tasks later on in life.
      • Example: For instance, a 2020 research paper published in the journal Frontiers in Psychology investigated the link between fine motor skills and mathematical abilities in elementary school children, finding that those with better fine motor skills demonstrated stronger performance in math tasks involving spatial reasoning and manipulating objects.

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