Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Nowadays it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, some people experience problems when they are not able to pay their debts back. Do the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS Writing task 2(Đề computerr-based 10/7/2022)
I. Đề bài
Nowadays it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, some people experience problems when they are not able to pay their debts back. Do the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantages?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
- Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
- Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
- Main idea: Credit cards encourage people to spend money they do not have
- Supporting idea:
- Debts can build up and leave people in real financial difficulties. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "spend" tiếng anh
- When people cannot pay their debts back, everyone suffers: those in debt may lose their homes, the banks lose money, and the whole economy suffers.
- Example:
- Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
- Main idea: Since they’re so easy to use, they also make it easy to overspend.
- Supporting idea: If we buy something and fail to pay it off immediately, we will end up paying not only the purchase price but also the interest charge on that item.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "spending" tiếng anh
- Example:
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
- Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé)
- Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
- Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages
- Main idea 1: A credit card gives you access to money and the facility to pay it back later, like a loan.
- Supporting idea: This means that credit card offers people access to money and the facility to settle up later which is very useful in case of emergency.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Paraphrase về "thu nhập"(income) & "chi tiêu"
- Example: This could be useful for emergencies or something expensive, like a holiday.
- Main idea 2: having a credit card is more secure than carrying money around with you.
- Supporting idea: If you lose your wallet or purse, or if you are mugged in the street, a quick phone call to the bank means that the card will be instantly refused if anyone tries to use it.
- Example:
- Main idea 1: A credit card gives you access to money and the facility to pay it back later, like a loan.
- Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages
- Main idea 1: Credit cards encourage people to spend money they do not have
- Supporting idea:
- Debts can build up and leave people in real financial difficulties.
- When people cannot pay their debts back, everyone suffers: those in debt may lose their homes, the banks lose money, and the whole economy suffers.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)
- Example:
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 2: Since they’re so easy to use, they also make it easy to overspend.
- Supporting idea: If we buy something and fail to pay it off immediately, we will end up paying not only the purchase price but also the interest charge on that item.
- Example:
- Main idea 1: Credit cards encourage people to spend money they do not have
- Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
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