Phân tích"Nowadays it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, some people experience problems when they are not able to pay their debts back. Do the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS Writing task 2(Đề computerr-based 10/7/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Nowadays it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, some people experience problems when they are not able to pay their debts back. Do the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS Writing task 2(Đề computerr-based 10/7/2022)

Nowadays it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, some people experience problems when they are not able to pay their debts back. Do the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: Credit cards encourage people to spend money they do not have
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Debts can build up and leave people in real financial difficulties.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "spend" tiếng anh
        • When people cannot pay their debts back, everyone suffers: those in debt may lose their homes, the banks lose money, and the whole economy suffers.
      • Example: 
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: Since they’re so easy to use, they also make it easy to overspend. 
      • Supporting idea:  If we buy something and fail to pay it off immediately, we will end up paying not only the purchase price but also the interest charge on that item.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "spending" tiếng anh
      • Example: 
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: A credit card gives you access to money and the facility to pay it back later, like a loan. 
        • Supporting idea: This means that credit card offers people access to money and the facility to settle up later which is very useful in case of emergency.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase về "thu nhập"(income) & "chi tiêu"
        • Example: This could be useful for emergencies or something expensive, like a holiday.
      • Main idea 2: having a credit card is more secure than carrying money around with you. 
        • Supporting idea: If you lose your wallet or purse, or if you are mugged in the street, a quick phone call to the bank means that the card will be instantly refused if anyone tries to use it.
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: Credit cards encourage people to spend money they do not have
        • Supporting idea:
          • Debts can build up and leave people in real financial difficulties.
          • When people cannot pay their debts back, everyone suffers: those in debt may lose their homes, the banks lose money, and the whole economy suffers.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: Since they’re so easy to use, they also make it easy to overspend.
        • Supporting idea:  If we buy something and fail to pay it off immediately, we will end up paying not only the purchase price but also the interest charge on that item.
        • Example: 

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