Giải đề"Students today can access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh phân tích đề thi thật task 1 viết thư của IELTS GENERAL được sửa rất kĩ bởi giáo viên cho bạn học sinh đã đi thi ngày đó và đạt 6.0 nhé, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích đề "Students today can access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Students today can access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY 
    • Main idea: a significant amount of information on the internet nowadays has never been verified, and therefore, it is prejudiced, inaccurate, or even misleading. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Since everyone can easily write and post information on the internet, these online sources are not always reliable for research) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "RESEARCH" như Noun & Verb tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Such information can potentially warp students’ perception on many life issues, which can cause devastating effects on both their professional careers and private lives later down the road >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "cause" tiếng anh
        • It is much better for students to gain wisdom from books than from materials circulating the Internet (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Books are always censored before being published) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "material" tiếng anh 
        • We need libraries whose staff members have the responsibility to select and provide readers with the most credible materials. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "provide" 
      • Example: The abundance of unverified medical information online leads to confusion and potentially harmful choices for individuals.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY 
    • Main idea: it is not by accident that libraries are known as CULTURAL and LEARNING SPACE 
      • Supporting idea: Libraries usually provide a quiet space for reading or learning. This will greatly benefit students who are learning or researching since they are less likely to be distracted by people or things around them. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng BENEFIT (động từ, danh từ) & BENEFICIAL 
      • Example: For example, many university students claim that they can only concentrate when they are in a quiet study area in their university library.
  • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: 
    • Main idea: not only does a library store books, but it is also the place where research papers, periodicals and other materials are organized in a logical manner by SKILLED ARCHIVISTS, helping to FACILITATE LEARNERS’FINDING. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "Research" tiếng anh 
    • Supporting idea: 
      • While though the Internet is clearly an immense source of information, to download materials they need, in many cases, students have to follow step-by-step registration or might get unwanted links, which makes them time-consuming.
      • By letting young people borrow books without having to pay high fees, libraries have created the best condition for students to widen their knowledge and save their money at the same time. 
    • Example: For example, to locate books, the young can either base on a unique number given on the spine of each book or ask librarians. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "locate" tiếng anh 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Nowadays, the Internet provides students with instant access to knowledge, leading some to claim that libraries have become obsolete. However, I totally disagree with this statement, as libraries continue to play an indispensable (essential; không thể thiếu) role in ensuring reliable learning and fostering academic growth.

Firstly, not all information available online is trustworthy. Since virtually anyone can upload content, a large portion of online materials remain unverified (not checked; chưa được xác minh) and can therefore be misleading (giving wrong ideas; gây hiểu lầm). Such information can distort students’ perceptions of crucial issues, which might later have devastating (causing serious damage; gây tàn phá) effects on their professional careers and personal lives. By contrast, books and journals in libraries are carefully censored (officially reviewed; được kiểm duyệt) before publication, guaranteeing accuracy and academic credibility. Moreover, libraries employ staff members who curate (organize carefully; tuyển chọn kỹ) and provide the most credible resources for learners. For instance, the overwhelming amount of unverified medical advice online often leads to confusion and harmful health choices, while well-documented library sources prevent such risks.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

Secondly, libraries are not only repositories of books but also unique cultural and learning spaces (không gian văn hóa và học tập). They provide quiet, distraction-free environments that allow students to focus more effectively, unlike the Internet where learners are constantly tempted by notifications or irrelevant links. Furthermore, libraries house archival (relating to stored records; thuộc về lưu trữ) materials such as research papers, periodicals, and reference books, which are systematically organized by skilled archivists (chuyên viên lưu trữ có kỹ năng). This logical system significantly facilitates (makes easier; tạo điều kiện cho) the process of locating information. For example, students can either find books through catalogue numbers or directly ask librarians for guidance—both far more efficient than navigating countless websites that require registrations or contain distracting advertisements.

In conclusion, despite the prevalence of online resources, libraries remain essential by offering reliable materials and a conducive learning environment.

New Vocabulary with Synonyms & Antonyms

1. Indispensable (essential; không thể thiếu)

   • Synonyms: vital, crucial, necessary

   • Antonyms: dispensable, unnecessary, trivial

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: libraries continue to play an indispensable role.

2. Unverified (not checked; chưa được xác minh)

   • Synonyms: unchecked, unconfirmed, unproven

   • Antonyms: verified, authenticated, validated

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: a large portion of online materials remain unverified.

3. Misleading (giving wrong ideas; gây hiểu lầm)

   • Synonyms: deceptive, false, inaccurate

   • Antonyms: truthful, reliable, accurate

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: and can therefore be misleading.

4. Devastating (causing serious damage; gây tàn phá)

   • Synonyms: destructive, harmful, catastrophic

   • Antonyms: beneficial, harmless, constructive

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: which might later have devastating effects.

5. Censored (officially reviewed; được kiểm duyệt)

   • Synonyms: reviewed, regulated, edited

   • Antonyms: unregulated, unrestricted, unchecked

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: are carefully censored before publication.

6. Curate (organize carefully; tuyển chọn kỹ)

   • Synonyms: organize, arrange, select

   • Antonyms: ignore, neglect, mismanage

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: libraries employ staff members who curate credible resources.

7. Archival (relating to stored records; thuộc về lưu trữ)

   • Synonyms: documentary, record-keeping, historical

   • Antonyms: temporary, current, modern

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: libraries house archival materials.

8. Skilled archivists (chuyên viên lưu trữ có kỹ năng)

   • Synonyms: trained librarians, experienced curators, professional keepers

   • Antonyms: unskilled workers, amateurs, novices

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: organized by skilled archivists.

9. Facilitates (makes easier; tạo điều kiện cho)

   • Synonyms: assists, simplifies, promotes

   • Antonyms: hinders, obstructs, complicates

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: This logical system significantly facilitates locating information.

Difficult Grammar Structures

1. “Since virtually anyone can upload content, a large portion of online materials remain unverified and can therefore be misleading.”

   • Grammar: Complex sentence with adverbial clause of reason (Since …), main clause with coordination (remain … and can …).

   • Vietnamese: Vì hầu như ai cũng có thể đăng tải nội dung, một phần lớn tài liệu trực tuyến chưa được xác minh và do đó có thể gây hiểu lầm.

2. “Such information can distort students’ perceptions of crucial issues, which might later have devastating effects on their professional careers and personal lives.”

   • Grammar: Relative clause (which …) + modal verb structure.

   • Vietnamese: Những thông tin như vậy có thể bóp méo nhận thức của sinh viên về các vấn đề quan trọng, điều này sau đó có thể gây ra những ảnh hưởng tàn phá đến sự nghiệp và cuộc sống cá nhân của họ.

3. “Not only … but also” inversion

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Libraries are not only repositories of books but also unique cultural and learning spaces.”

   • Grammar: Parallel structure with “not only … but also”.

   • Vietnamese: Thư viện không chỉ là kho lưu trữ sách mà còn là những không gian văn hóa và học tập độc đáo.

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