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The most common solution for criminal behaviour is prison but many believe education is a better method. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Nếu theo quan điểm TOTALLY DISAGREE với quan điểm “some people believe that better education will be a more effective solution” có thể triển khai 2 đoạn thân bài như sau:
  • Body 1: nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE với quan điểm “some people believe that better education will be a more effective solution” 
    • Main idea:  They are the place to keep people who have broken the law contained, ensuring the safety of other citizens.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic Rules / laws & court IELTS
    • Supporting idea: The offenders behind bars are no longer a threat to the safety of society. Especially, dangerous criminals such as murderers or rapists have to be imprisoned for their heinous actions. 
    • Example: Serial killers or political terrorists who may repeat offenses in the future should be sentenced to life imprisonment so that law-abiding citizens could be protected.
  • Body 2: nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE với quan điểm “some people believe that better education will be a more effective solution”
    • Main idea:  severe prison sentences act as a deterrent against crimes.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "control" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea: Knowing there might be a chance of getting caught and condemned to jail, which also means losing freedom and living a miserable life in a cell, ones who are having the intention of committing illegalities would reconsider going down the path. 
    • Example: 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Crime is a persistent social problem, and while some argue that improving education is the most effective solution, I strongly disagree with this view. I believe that prison sentences remain a more practical and immediate method of maintaining social order and protecting the public.

To begin with, prisons serve as secure containment facilities (nơi giam giữ an toàn: places designed to isolate criminals from society) that prevent offenders from posing further risks to law-abiding citizens. Individuals who have violated the law are physically removed from the community, ensuring public safety (an toàn xã hội: protection of citizens from harm). This is particularly crucial for heinous crimes (tội ác ghê tởm: extremely immoral or violent acts) such as murder or rape, where offenders demonstrate a clear threat to human life. For example, serial killers or political terrorists, who are highly repeat-offense-prone (dễ tái phạm: likely to commit crimes again), should receive life imprisonment so that innocent members of society can live without fear.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Moreover, harsh prison terms function as a powerful crime deterrent (biện pháp răn đe tội phạm: something that discourages criminal behavior). The possibility of being arrested and condemned to incarceration (bị kết án tù: officially sentenced to prison)—which entails losing freedom and enduring a miserable, cell-bound existence (cuộc sống khốn khổ trong phòng giam: extremely unpleasant prison life)—can dissuade potential offenders. When individuals are aware that illegal actions may result in severe punishment, they are more likely to reconsider engaging in unlawful behavior.
Ví dụ (dịch sang tiếng Việt): Khi biết rằng mình có thể bị bắt và phải ngồi tù trong điều kiện sống khắc nghiệt, nhiều người sẽ từ bỏ ý định phạm pháp.

In conclusion, although education plays a long-term role in shaping moral values, prison punishment is far more effective in immediately controlling crime by isolating dangerous individuals and deterring others from breaking the law.

New Vocabulary List 

1. secure containment facilities (nơi giam giữ an toàn)
   Synonyms: detention centers, correctional facilities, holding institutions
   Antonyms: open spaces, free communities, public areas
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Prisons act as secure containment facilities that isolate criminals.

2. public safety (an toàn xã hội)
   Synonyms: social security, community safety, civic protection
   Antonyms: public danger, social instability, insecurity
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Imprisonment ensures public safety.

3. heinous crimes (tội ác ghê tởm)
   Synonyms: atrocious acts, brutal crimes, monstrous offenses
   Antonyms: minor offenses, petty crimes, lawful acts
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Murder is considered one of the most heinous crimes.

4. repeat-offense-prone (dễ tái phạm)
   Synonyms: habitual, chronic, reoffending
   Antonyms: law-abiding, reformed, compliant
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Serial killers are repeat-offense-prone.

5. crime deterrent (biện pháp răn đe tội phạm)
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   Antonyms: encouragement, incentive, provocation
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Long sentences act as a crime deterrent.

6. condemned to incarceration (bị kết án tù)
   Synonyms: sentenced to prison, jailed, imprisoned
   Antonyms: acquitted, released, pardoned
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Offenders may be condemned to incarceration.

Difficult Grammar Structures Used 

1. While + contrasting clause
   → While some argue that improving education is effective, I strongly disagree.

2. Relative clause
   → Criminals who have violated the law are removed from society.

3. Passive voice (formal tone)
   → Offenders are physically removed from the community.

4. Conditional meaning with modal verbs
   → Criminals may be sentenced to life imprisonment.

5. Noun phrases with multiple modifiers
   → a miserable, cell-bound existence

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