Phân tích "The bar chart shows the number of people who visited different museums in London" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Computer-based 26/5/2022)

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The bar chart shows the number of people who visited different museums in London" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Computer-based 26/5/2022).

I. Đề bài

The bar chart shows the number of people who visited different museums in London.

The graph below shows the average retirement age of males and females in six countries in 2003

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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    • Overall:
      • With the exception of the Science Museum, the number of visitors to each museum witnessed an upward trend during the first half, and then decreased in the second half of the period
      • Whilst the British Museum was the most frequently visited in most of the months, the National Museum was consistently in the last place. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "most of...." tiếng anh
    • Body 1: (Viết về June + July)
      • In the first two months, there were hardly any changes in the popularity of the four places as the History Museum, the British Museum and the Science Museum received about 400,000 visits each while visitor numbers to the National Museum hovered around 200,000 (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: In the first two months of the period, all figures remained nearly constant with the quantities of people coming to History museum, British museum and Science museum standing at over 400,00 while the data for National Museum was significantly lower, at around 200,000)
    • Body 2: Viết về August + September + October)
      • The remaining months witnessed more remarkable changes, with the figures for the History Museum, the British Museum, and the National Museum soaring in August to peak at 600,000 visits, roughly 710,000 visits and slightly above 300,000 visits, respectively, before dropping substantially in September and December. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng & paraphrase "respectively"/ "respective"
      • There was no change in the number of visitors to the Science Museum in August, which was followed by a marked rise to a high of 500,000 in September and a noticeable fall to merely 300,000 in December. 
      • Visitor traffic to both the History Museum and the National Museum was also lowest in the last month, at only 200,000 visits, more or less.
    • IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
      • Ngoài ra còn một cách chia bố cục nữa là 
        • Body 1: Viết về History Museum + British Museum 
        • Body 2: Viết về National Museum + Science Museum 

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