Phân tích & sửa đề"The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019." IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Cam 16 Test 1 Writing Task 1)

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019."IELTS WRITING TASK 1

I. Đề bài

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Overall: People tended to use labor-saving devices more and spent less time on doing household chores (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: all electrical appliances became more popular, in particular refrigerators and vacuum cleaners/The total time spent doing housework has also declined steadily and dramatically in the last one hundred years)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "decline" tiếng anh
  • Body 1: Viết về biểu đồ 1: chia theo từng loại device để mô tả cho dễ nhé:
    • Washing machine: 
      • in 1920, the percentage of households owning a washer stood at 40%. This figure steadily rose to 70% over the next 40 years before slightly dropping by 5% in 1980. 
      • From 1980 to 2019, the rate for houses equipped with a washer gradually increased to 75%.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "equipment"tiếng anh 
    • Vacuum cleaner:
      • In 1920, there were 30% of households owning this device. 
      • From 1920 to 2000, this figure steadily rose to 100% and remained stable over the next 19 years.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  PHÂN BIỆT "REMAIN & RETAIN" TIẾNG ANH
    • Refrigerator: 
      • In 1920, no one had a fridge in their house. 
      • After 60 years, this device was installed in every household and this stayed unchanged from 1980 to 2019 (nêu số liệu)
  • Body 2: Viết về biểu đồ 2
    • In 1920, the number of hours people spent on doing household chores per week was 50 hours. 
    • This figure saw a gradual drop to 15 hours in 1980 and remained stable over the next 20 years.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Mô tả số liệu IELTS Writing Task 1
    • In 2019, people only spent 10 hours a week doing household chores.

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