Phân tích & sửa đề"The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019." IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Cam 16 Test 1 Writing Task 1) - Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019."IELTS WRITING TASK 1

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Overall: People tended to use labor-saving devices more and spent less time on doing household chores (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: all electrical appliances became more popular, in particular refrigerators and vacuum cleaners/The total time spent doing housework has also declined steadily and dramatically in the last one hundred years)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "decline" tiếng anh
• Body 1: Viết về biểu đồ 1: chia theo từng loại device để mô tả cho dễ nhé:
  • Washing machine: 
    • in 1920, the percentage of households owning a washer stood at 40%. This figure steadily rose to 70% over the next 40 years before slightly dropping by 5% in 1980. 
    • From 1980 to 2019, the rate for houses equipped with a washer gradually increased to 75%.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "equipment"tiếng anh 
  • Vacuum cleaner:
    • In 1920, there were 30% of households owning this device. 
    • From 1920 to 2000, this figure steadily rose to 100% and remained stable over the next 19 years.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  PHÂN BIỆT "REMAIN & RETAIN" TIẾNG ANH
  • Refrigerator: 
    • In 1920, no one had a fridge in their house. 
    • After 60 years, this device was installed in every household and this stayed unchanged from 1980 to 2019 (nêu số liệu)
• Body 2: Viết về biểu đồ 2
  • In 1920, the number of hours people spent on doing household chores per week was 50 hours. 
  • This figure saw a gradual drop to 15 hours in 1980 and remained stable over the next 20 years.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Mô tả số liệu IELTS Writing Task 1
  • In 2019, people only spent 10 hours a week doing household chores.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The two charts illustrate the ownership trends (ownership trends: xu hướng sở hữu – patterns of possession over time) of three labour-saving appliances (labour-saving appliances: thiết bị tiết kiệm sức lao động – machines that reduce physical effort) and the average weekly duration (average weekly duration: thời lượng trung bình hàng tuần – the average number of hours per week) of housework per household from 1920 to 2019 in a particular country.

Overall, all household appliances witnessed a sharp surge in popularity (sharp surge in popularity: sự gia tăng mạnh mẽ về mức độ phổ biến – a rapid increase in usage), especially refrigerators and vacuum cleaners, while the time-consuming burden of chores was drastically reduced.

In 1920, just 40% of homes had a washing machine, rising to 70% in 1960 before a minor dip in 1980, then rising modestly to 75% by 2019. Vacuum cleaners, once owned by only 30%, saw a consistent upswing (consistent upswing: sự gia tăng liên tục – steady increase) to full saturation by 2000, where it remained. Refrigerators, initially absent in all homes, became ubiquitous (ubiquitous: phổ biến khắp nơi – found everywhere) by 1980 and retained that status.

Simultaneously, the weekly time commitment (weekly time commitment: khoảng thời gian làm việc nhà hàng tuần – the amount of time spent each week) dropped from 50 hours in 1920 to just 10 by 2019, following a steady fall over the century.

✅ Vocabulary Expansion

1. sharp surge in popularity

• Synonyms: sudden rise, dramatic increase, soaring demand

• Antonyms: sharp decline, falling trend, decreasing interest

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “...witnessed a sharp surge in popularity, especially refrigerators…”

2. consistent upswing

• Synonyms: steady growth, continuous rise, gradual improvement

• Antonyms: steady decline, gradual drop, consistent fall

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “...saw a consistent upswing to full saturation by 2000…”

3. ubiquitous

• Synonyms: widespread, universal, omnipresent

• Antonyms: rare, uncommon, infrequent

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “...refrigerators, initially absent in all homes, became ubiquitous by 1980…”

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