Giải đề"In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both views and give your own opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 28/6/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both views and give your own opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
    • Main idea 1: It could help reduce the pay gap between the highest and lowest earners (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: By introducing a limit on earnings, the pay-gap between bosses and employees can be reduced) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách paraphrase từ "reduce" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Currently, the difference between normal and top salaries is huge, and this can demotivate workers who feel that the situation is unfair. 
        • With lower executive salaries, it might become feasible to introduce higher minimum wages, and everybody would be better off. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng & word form của "feasible" tiếng anh
      • Example: For example, in the United States, CEOs of major corporations often earn more than 300 times the salary of an average worker. This vast disparity can create feelings of resentment and unfairness among employees, potentially affecting their productivity and morale.
    • Main idea 2: Higher earnings confined to a few hands increases inequality in the society because this gives rise to feelings like jealousy and hatred.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • People who do not earn much may feel hatred towards those who earn too much. In such situations, the crime rate is more likely to increase. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng THOSE đứng trước WHO tiếng anh
        • Many studies show that countries with a narrower income gap often have lower poverty and crime rates than those experiencing growing economic inequality.
      • Example: For instance, in the United States, the top 1% of earners have seen their incomes grow by over 200% since 1979, while the bottom 90% experienced less than 25% growth, coinciding with increased social tensions and crime rates in urban areas. In contrast, Sweden's policies of progressive taxation and strong social welfare have led to lower poverty and crime rates, mitigating feelings of jealousy and hatred through a more equitable distribution of wealth.

  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people believe that this is good for the country & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Setting a limit on earnings would encourage the most skilled workers, who make significant contributions to their companies, to leave and work in a foreign country.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The absence of a skilled executive, for example, might cause a company a loss of thousands of dollars, and it would take quite a long time to hire another one. 
        • This brain drain of the top employees would cause enterprises and the economy great damage. >> IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp Từ vựng topic Economy IELTS 
    • Main idea 2: If companies offer excellent pay packages, they can attract the most talented people in their fields to work for them. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "attract" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:
        • These well-paid employees are likely to be highly motivated to work hard and therefore drive their businesses successfully. >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Word form "motivate" tiếng anh
        • In theory, this should result in a thriving economy and increased tax revenues, which means that paying high salaries benefits everyone.
      • Example: For example, technology companies like Google are able to employ the best programmers because of the huge sums that they are willing to pay.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In many nations, a small fraction of the population (English: a small part of the population – Vietnamese: một bộ phận nhỏ của dân số) enjoys sky-high incomes (English: extremely high earnings – Vietnamese: mức lương cực kỳ cao), and while some contend that placing a cap on salaries (English: an upper limit on earnings – Vietnamese: giới hạn mức lương) could foster social equality, others maintain that such high earnings are essential for driving economic advancement. Although both views hold merit, I align more with the latter, as unrestricted earnings can stimulate both innovation and national growth.

On the one hand, it is undeniable that capping the income of the wealthy brings more benefits to society as a whole. Firstly, limiting excessive income can help narrow the income disparity (English: reduce the income gap – Vietnamese: thu hẹp khoảng cách thu nhập) between executives and general employees. Currently, the glaring wage gap (English: an obvious difference in income – Vietnamese: sự chênh lệch tiền lương rõ rệt) can breed resentment (English: cause feelings of anger or unfairness – Vietnamese: gây ra sự oán giận) among workers. For instance, in the U.S., CEOs often earn more than 300 times what an average employee does, undermining morale and productivity. Furthermore, disproportionate wealth (English: unequal distribution of money – Vietnamese: sự phân phối tài sản không đồng đều) may fuel social unrest (English: cause tension and conflict – Vietnamese: gây bất ổn xã hội), leading to higher crime rates. In contrast, nations like Sweden that implement progressive taxation (English: tax system where the rich pay a higher percentage – Vietnamese: hệ thống thuế lũy tiến) and income regulation have witnessed greater social harmony and economic stability.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

On the other hand, I do believe that a small group of individuals earning exceptionally high incomes can bring considerable advantages to a country for various reasons. Firstly, allowing lucrative compensation packages (English: attractive salary offers – Vietnamese: gói lương hấp dẫn) helps attract and retain top-tier professionals. Without competitive remuneration, many of the most skilled individuals might seek greener pastures abroad (English: better opportunities in foreign countries – Vietnamese: cơ hội tốt hơn ở nước ngoài), resulting in brain drain (English: loss of skilled professionals – Vietnamese: chảy máu chất xám). For example, multinational tech firms like Google offer high salaries to recruit world-class talent, which not only enhances business performance but also contributes to the national GDP (English: gross domestic product – Vietnamese: tổng sản phẩm quốc nội). Additionally, such high earners pay more in taxes, thereby bolstering public services (English: strengthening government-funded services – Vietnamese: củng cố các dịch vụ công cộng).

In conclusion, while limiting salaries may reduce inequality, I believe that allowing high incomes ultimately brings more long-term benefits to both businesses and the broader economy.

Example Vocabulary Use with Synonyms & Antonyms

• Vocabulary: breed resentment

  • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “The glaring wage gap can breed resentment among workers.”

  • 3 Synonyms: foster bitterness, create hostility, cause dissatisfaction

  • 3 Antonyms: encourage harmony, promote unity, foster goodwill

Difficult Grammar Structures

1. Although both views hold merit, I align more with the latter...

   • Mặc dù cả hai quan điểm đều có lý, tôi nghiêng về quan điểm thứ hai hơn...

   • → Although + clause, main clause: Complex sentence with concessive clause

2. Without competitive remuneration, many skilled individuals might seek greener pastures abroad...

   • Nếu không có chế độ đãi ngộ cạnh tranh, nhiều người có kỹ năng có thể tìm kiếm cơ hội ở nước ngoài...

   • → Without + noun, clause: Conditional structure with omission of "if"

3. Such high earners pay more in taxes, thereby bolstering public services.

   • Những người có thu nhập cao như vậy đóng nhiều thuế hơn, do đó củng cố các dịch vụ công.

   • → Thereby + V-ing: Used to show result or effect

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