Phân tích "In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both views and give your own opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both views and give your own opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
    • Main idea 1: It could help reduce the pay gap between the highest and lowest earners (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: By introducing a limit on earnings, the pay-gap between bosses and employees can be reduced) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách paraphrase từ "reduce" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Currently, the difference between normal and top salaries is huge, and this can demotivate workers who feel that the situation is unfair. 
        • With lower executive salaries, it might become feasible to introduce higher minimum wages, and everybody would be better off. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng & word form của "feasible" tiếng anh
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Higher earnings confined to a few hands increases inequality in the society because this gives rise to feelings like jealousy and hatred.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • People who do not earn much may feel hatred towards those who earn too much. In such situations, the crime rate is more likely to increase. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng THOSE đứng trước WHO tiếng anh
        • Many studies show that countries with a narrower income gap often have lower poverty and crime rates than those experiencing growing economic inequality.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people believe that this is good for the country & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Setting a limit on earnings would encourage the most skilled workers, who make significant contributions to their companies, to leave and work in a foreign country.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The absence of a skilled executive, for example, might cause a company a loss of thousands of dollars, and it would take quite a long time to hire another one. 
        • This brain drain of the top employees would cause enterprises and the economy great damage. >> IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp Từ vựng topic Economy IELTS 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: If companies offer excellent pay packages, they can attract the most talented people in their fields to work for them. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "attract" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:
        • These well-paid employees are likely to be highly motivated to work hard and therefore drive their businesses successfully. >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Word form "motivate" tiếng anh
        • In theory, this should result in a thriving economy and increased tax revenues, which means that paying high salaries benefits everyone.
      • Example: For example, technology companies like Google are able to employ the best programmers because of the huge sums that they are willing to pay.

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