Phân tích "The increase in food production owes much to fertilizers and better machinery, but some people think that it has a negative impact on human health and community. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The increase in food production owes much to fertilizers and better machinery, but some people think that it has a negative impact on human health and community. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

The increase in food production owes much to fertilizers and better machinery, but some people think that it has a negative impact on human health and community. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: The use of fertilizers and pesticides in modern agriculture may lead to the presence of chemical residues in food, which can potentially pose health risks to consumers.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Some pesticides and fertilizers contain harmful substances that, if ingested at high levels, can lead to adverse health effects. 
        • Prolonged exposure to these chemical residues may increase the risk of various health issues, including certain types of cancers, neurological disorders, and reproductive problems. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý: Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0)
      • Example: 
        • One example is the pesticide DDT, which was widely used in agriculture until it was banned in the United States in 1972. DDT has been linked to a number of health problems, including cancer, reproductive problems, and neurological disorders. 
        • Another example is the pesticide glyphosate, which is the active ingredient in the herbicide Roundup. Glyphosate has been linked to cancer, and it has also been shown to disrupt the gut microbiome, which can have a number of health consequences. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý: Phân tích&Bài Sửa HS đạt 7.0"The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce fertiliser (compost)" IELTS WRITING TASK 1
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: The increased use of fertilizers and machinery can contribute to environmental pollution and habitat destruction, affecting both human health and the well-being of communities.
      • Supporting idea:
        • The use of pesticides in conjunction with fertilizers can also lead to pesticide contamination of soil, water, and air. 
        • Pesticides can be toxic to non-target species and pose risks to beneficial insects, birds, and other wildlife.  >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý: PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: 
        • The use of pesticides in agriculture has been linked to a decline in the populations of beneficial insects, such as bees and butterflies. 
        • Bees are important pollinators, and their decline has had a negative impact on crop yields. Butterflies are also important predators of pests, and their decline has led to an increase in pest populations. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý: Phân tích & Sửa đề"Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and the government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" (ngày21/11/2020)

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