PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ"The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

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I. Đề bài

The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.

The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.

II. Từ vựng

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng topic "Map / Get lost"

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Overall:
    • Except for the main building of the hospital, other buildings were demolished. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Word form của "Demolish"
    • Some features in the map were modified and a few new buildings were constructed (HOẶC IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm: the main changes include the constructions of a cancer centre, a pharmacy and nursing school and a decrease in the car park’s capacity)
  • Body 1: Viết năm 1960
    • Queen Mary Hospital was constructed close to a main road. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "construct" tiếng anh
    • A shopping centre is located next to the Hospital (HOẶC IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm: There was a farmland behind it The hospital was built close to a main road and next to a shopping centre. A large area behind the hospital was a car park, while the area behind the shopping centre was farmland)
  • Body 2: Viết năm 1980
    • The shopping centre was replaced by two new buildings namely the Cancer centre (HOẶC IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm: the shopping centre was removed to make room for the constructions of a cancer centre and a pharmacy)
    • Nursing school was constructed on the farmland. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "construct" tiếng anh 
    • Hospital and car park were left unchanged 
  • Body 3: Viết năm 2000
    • The main hospital building remained unchanged, but the cancer centre was extended to cover the entire nursing school. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "remains" tiếng anh 
    • The original car park was divided into two so that it provided a smaller car park and a small nursing school.

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