Phân tích"The chart below shows the percentage of people of different age groups who went to the cinema once a month or more in one European country from 2000 to 2011"IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Thi máy 9/3/2022 & 21/4/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The chart below shows the percentage of people of different age groups who went to the cinema once a month or more in one European country from 2000 to 2011" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Thi máy 9/3/2022)

The chart below shows the percentage of people of different age groups who went to the cinema once a month or more in one European country from 2000 to 2011 (Thi máy 9/3/2022)

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  • Overall:
    • the percentage of people visiting the cinema once a month was highest amongst those aged 15 to 24 years-old, and lowest amongst those aged 35 and over (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: there were always more people aged between 15 and 25 going to the cinema compared to the other age groups, and the 35+ is the only group that had the most consistent growth)
    • the figures for all age groups increased over the given period (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the rates of moviegoers of all ages generally increased despite periodic fluctuations)
  • Body 1: Viết về 15-24 & 35 and over:
    • 15-24
      • In 2000, 15% of people aged 15 to 24 years-old visited the cinema once a month. 
      • This figure tripled over the following five and a half years, and continued to rise to over 50% by 2011 >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "following" tiếng anh
    • 35 and over
      • Only approximately 3% of people aged 35 and over visited the cinema at least once a month. 
      • This figure also gradually rose over the years to reach approximately 13% in 2011.
  • Body 2: Viết về 2 age groups còn lại vì xu hướng hơi giống nhau (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: Very similar trends could be seen for those aged 7-14 and 25-35) 
    • Beginning at approximately 10% and 5% respectively, both figures continued to rise over the measured period to both reach 30% by 2011 >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Cách paraphrase từ "approximately" 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The provided chart illustrates the percentage of individuals across various age groups who attended cinemas at least once a month in a European country from 2000 to 2011.

Overall, the proportion of individuals frequenting cinemas monthly was highest among the 15 to 24 age bracket, while it was lowest for those aged 35 and above.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

Between 2000 and 2011, the proportion of 15 to 24-year-olds visiting cinemas monthly increased from approximately 15% to over 50%, tripling over a span of five and a half years. Conversely, only about 3% of individuals aged 35 and above frequented cinemas monthly in 2000, but this figure gradually escalated to approximately 13% by 2011.

Similar trends were observed for those aged 7 to 14 and 25 to 35. Commencing at roughly 10% and 5% respectively, both cohorts experienced a steady increase to approximately 30% by 2011.

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