Phân tích"The chart below shows the percentage of people of different age groups who went to the cinema once a month or more in one European country from 2000 to 2011"IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Thi máy 9/3/2022)

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The chart below shows the percentage of people of different age groups who went to the cinema once a month or more in one European country from 2000 to 2011" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Thi máy 9/3/2022)

I. Đề bài

The chart below shows the percentage of people of different age groups who went to the cinema once a month or more in one European country from 2000 to 2011 (Thi máy 9/3/2022)

The pictures show how the community centre looked 10 years ago and its current layout

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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    • Overall:
      • the percentage of people visiting the cinema once a month was highest amongst those aged 15 to 24 years-old, and lowest amongst those aged 35 and over (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: there were always more people aged between 15 and 25 going to the cinema compared to the other age groups, and the 35+ is the only group that had the most consistent growth)
      • the figures for all age groups increased over the given period (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the rates of moviegoers of all ages generally increased despite periodic fluctuations)
    • Body 1: Viết về 15-24 & 35 and over:
      • 15-24
        • In 2000, 15% of people aged 15 to 24 years-old visited the cinema once a month. 
        • This figure tripled over the following five and a half years, and continued to rise to over 50% by 2011 >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "following" tiếng anh
      • 35 and over
        • Only approximately 3% of people aged 35 and over visited the cinema at least once a month. 
        • This figure also gradually rose over the years to reach approximately 13% in 2011.
    • Body 2: Viết về 2 age groups còn lại vì xu hướng hơi giống nhau (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: Very similar trends could be seen for those aged 7-14 and 25-35) 
      • Beginning at approximately 10% and 5% respectively, both figures continued to rise over the measured period to both reach 30% by 2011 >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Cách paraphrase từ "approximately" 

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