Phân tích"The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR cũng Phân tích "The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services" IELTS WRITING TASK 1.

The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:​

• Dạng gì: Mixed (pie + pie)
  • Chủ ngữ của bài: the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.
  • Đơn vị của bài: %
  • Chia thì gì, vì sao: không nói gì cả, chia hiện tại đơn.
  • Câu Overall: mỗi biểu đồ 1 câu.
    • Full-time students tend to be more satisfied with the two services than their part-time counterparts. 
    • Both full-time and part-time students gave positive feedback about the library opening hours.
    • Nếu muốn so sánh part time với full time students có thể tham khảo cách viết khác: 
      • It is clear that the opening hours received more positive feedback than the IT support. 
      • Full-time students tended to be more satisfied with the two services than their part-time counterparts.
• Bố cục cách viết 2 đoạn thân bài:
  • Body 1: biểu đồ 1 (how are you happy with IT support offered) - Regarding IT support
    • Over half of surveyed full-time students said that they were very happy with this service while only a fifth of part-time students reported that they were very happy >> IeLTS TutOR gợi ý CÁCH PARAPHRASE TỪ "HAPPY" IELTS
    • Just 15% of the students studying full-time were not satisfied with IT support, in comparison with 45% of their counterparts >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn cách dùng in comparison with / compared to/ with 
    • The proportion of both kinds of students being quite happy with this service was relatively the same, at about a third.
  • Body 2: biểu đồ 2 (how are you happy with currently opening hours)
    • The majority of full-time and part-time students felt happy with the current opening hours, with 87% and 72% respectively.
    • Only 1% of the examined full-time students were not satisfied with the opening hours, whereas the figure for part-time students was a little higher, at 5% >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt While/ Whereas
    • The remaining 12% of the surveyed full-time students felt quite happy with this service, as opposed to nearly a quarter of their part-time counterparts >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách diễn tả & paraphrase "phần còn lại" (remaining) tiếng anh

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