Phân tích "Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:

III. Phân tích

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  • Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
      • Main idea 1: With the advances of technology, an individual can communicate from any corner of the world without any interference or dependency on others.
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: For example, the postman used to take days to deliver messages from sender to receiver because that message had to physically travel from its source to the destination. However, same message could be delivered instantly to the other person through digital applications like WhatsApp and Skype.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic "RELATIONSHIP" tiếng anh
      • Main idea 2: people are now more encouraged to share their opinions openly via the Internet. 
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: One good illustration for this is the substantial number of friends that people who use social media applications have in their contact list.
    • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 - NEGATIVE 
      • Main idea 1: Digital communication tools often interferes with the bonding time that people share and thus has a negative influence on interpersonal relationships.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ interfere trong tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 
          • For example, many teenagers sacrifice real-life socialising time for mobile game playing time, which would be likely to cause friends to drift apart in the long term
          • There are many real examples of couples on the verge of breaking up because one or both partners have grown overly attached to social network applications on mobile phones, and they find it hard to maintain a sense of intimacy.
      • Main idea 2: Modern communication technology discourages direct communication, and this will enhance invisible distance among people. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • This is because we no longer have to visit others to get updates >> IELTS TUTOR hướng  dẫn  Diễn đạt "cập nhật tin tức" tiếng anh
          • The young prefer making friends online rather than mixing themselves in the real world
          • “Virtual” relationships are poor alternative / substitute for real ones
        • Example: 

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