Phân tích"The bar chart shows the types of media that people of different age groups used to get daily news in one country in 2011." IELTS WRITING TASK 1

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The bar chart shows the types of media that people of different age groups used to get daily news in one country in 2011." IELTS WRITING TASK 1.

The bar chart shows the types of media that people of different age groups used to get daily news in one country in 2011.

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  • Overall:
    • Social networking platforms were the major source of daily news for adolescents, whereas people from older age groups primarily used radio to stay updated on the news. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: radio was the most common source of news for all ages, except for the youngest category (10-17 years old)) >> IELTS TUTOR HƯỚNG DẪN TỪ A ĐẾN Z CÁCH PHÂN BIỆT EXCEPT FOR / EXCEPT THAT TRONG TIẾNG ANH
    • Microblogging was the least popular means of getting news for citizens of all ages. 
  • Body 1: Viết về Radio 
    • 88 to 95% of people in age groups above 17 listened to the radio for their news. 
    • Only 4 out of 10 people younger than this used the radio for this purpose.
  • Body 2: Viết về Micro Blogging + Social networks 
    • 80% of people under 29 got their news from social networks while this figure dropped dramatically to 45% for people age 30-49 and to only 10% for people in the oldest category (65+).
    • Micro-blogging was still most popular among the 10-17 and 18-29 age groups. This percentage experienced a significant fall in the older age groups, plummeting from 13% in 30-49-year-olds to only 2% in those over 65. (195 words) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "experience"

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The bar chart compares the prevalence (sự phổ biến – the extent to which something is common) of various media sources used by different age groups in one country to obtain daily news in 2011.

Overall, radio was the predominant (chiếm ưu thế – being the most common or having the greatest influence) medium for all age groups except for the youngest cohort (10–17), who favored social networking platforms. Microblogging (việc viết blog ngắn – posting brief updates online) was the least utilized method across all demographics.

Regarding radio, between 88% and 95% of individuals aged over 17 relied on it for news, whereas only four in ten teenagers did so.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

When it comes to social networks, 80% of under-29s accessed news through these platforms. This proportion declined sharply (giảm mạnh – fell quickly and noticeably) to 45% among 30–49-year-olds and to just 10% in those aged 65 and above. Microblogging remained most common among the two youngest age groups, before plummeting (giảm đột ngột – fall steeply) from 13% in the 30–49 category to only 2% for the oldest.

New Vocabulary List

1. Prevalence – sự phổ biến

   • Synonyms: widespreadness, frequency, pervasiveness

   • Antonyms: rarity, infrequency, scarcity

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The bar chart compares the prevalence of various media sources…

2. Predominant – chiếm ưu thế

   • Synonyms: primary, prevailing, dominant

   • Antonyms: minor, secondary, insignificant

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Radio was the predominant medium for all age groups except…

3. Microblogging – việc viết blog ngắn

   • Synonyms: short-form blogging, status posting, brief blogging

   • Antonyms: (no direct antonym; opposite would be long-form blogging)

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Microblogging was the least utilized method across all demographics.

4. Declined sharply – giảm mạnh

   • Synonyms: dropped significantly, fell steeply, decreased rapidly

   • Antonyms: rose sharply, increased dramatically, surged

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: This proportion declined sharply to 45% among 30–49-year-olds…

5. Plummeting – giảm đột ngột

   • Synonyms: tumbling, nosediving, plunging

   • Antonyms: soaring, skyrocketing, climbing

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: … before plummeting from 13% to only 2%…

Difficult Grammar Structures

1. Reduced relative clause

   • … the youngest cohort (10–17), who favored social networking platforms. → could be reduced to … the youngest cohort (10–17), favoring social networking platforms.

   • → … nhóm trẻ nhất (10–17), ưa chuộng mạng xã hội.

2. Prepositional phrase fronting for emphasis

   • When it comes to social networks, 80% of under-29s accessed news through these platforms.

   • → Về mạng xã hội, 80% người dưới 29 tuổi tiếp cận tin tức qua nền tảng này.

3. Range expression

   • Between 88% and 95% of individuals aged over 17 relied on it…

   • → Từ 88% đến 95% người trên 17 tuổi phụ thuộc vào nó…

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