Phân tích "Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi máy 6/8/2022 & 14/4/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi máy 6/8/2022).

Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: the role of being diligent is more significant than luck.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Individuals need to work really hard and concentrate much effort on their jobs if they want to be successful. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "concentrate" tiếng anh
        • Example: Thomas Edison conducted numerous experiments with the filament until the finest light bulb was produced, and his hard work, rather than luck, was acknowledged by all the human race. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng & Phân biệt RATHER THAN - INSTEAD OF tiếng anh
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: a person is less likely to reach his targets if he does not have determination.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Determination may keeps them forwarding on the way to approach success because there might be many difficulties. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "approach"
        • On the way to success, there might be many difficulties, and people need to keep moving forward to overcome those challenges.
      • Example: Research by Angela Duckworth suggests "grit," a combination of passion and perseverance, is a strong predictor of long-term success. Determination fuels the persistence needed to overcome obstacles and maintain effort over time, key aspects of grit.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Whether individuals accomplish their goals is often argued to depend largely on luck. However, I totally disagree with this view, as I firmly believe that personal diligence (sự chăm chỉ – consistent and sustained hard work) and unwavering determination (sự quyết tâm bền bỉ – strong mental resolve to persist) play a far more decisive role in shaping success than random chance.

To begin with, being diligent (chăm chỉ – putting in continuous effort over time) is significantly more influential than luck when it comes to achieving one’s aims. In reality, success is rarely accidental; instead, it is the outcome of goal-oriented effort (nỗ lực có định hướng – effort directed toward clear objectives) and the ability to concentrate resources (tập trung nguồn lực – focus time, energy, and skills effectively) on meaningful tasks. Individuals who consistently invest time and energy into their work are far more likely to see tangible results than those who merely wait for fortunate circumstances. A classic example is Thomas Edison, who conducted thousands of experiments before perfecting the light bulb; his breakthrough was widely recognized as the product of relentless perseverance (sự kiên trì không ngừng – refusal to give up despite repeated failure) rather than sheer luck.>> 🔥 Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Furthermore, people are unlikely to reach their targets without strong determination, regardless of how favorable their circumstances may be. Inner resolve (ý chí nội tại – internal strength to stay committed) enables individuals to keep moving forward when they encounter setbacks, which are inevitable on the path to success. Without determination, even talented individuals may abandon their goals when faced with hardship. Research by Angela Duckworth highlights the importance of “grit,” defined as a combination of passion and perseverance, as a powerful predictor of long-term achievement. This finding clearly illustrates that sustained effort and mental toughness, not luck, enable people to overcome obstacles (vượt qua trở ngại – successfully deal with difficulties) and maintain progress over time.

In conclusion, while luck may occasionally create opportunities, it is diligence and determination that ultimately determine whether individuals achieve their aims.

New Vocabulary List 

personal diligence (sự chăm chỉ – consistent and sustained hard work)

• Synonyms: industriousness, assiduity, perseverance

• Antonyms: laziness, negligence, idleness

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Personal diligence and unwavering determination play a far more decisive role…”

unwavering determination (sự quyết tâm bền bỉ – strong mental resolve to persist)

• Synonyms: steadfast resolve, tenacity, grit

• Antonyms: indecision, weakness, hesitation

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Unwavering determination plays a far more decisive role…”

goal-oriented effort (nỗ lực có định hướng – effort directed toward clear objectives)

• Synonyms: purpose-driven effort, focused work, strategic effort

• Antonyms: aimlessness, random effort, disorganization

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concentrate resources (tập trung nguồn lực – focus time, energy, and skills effectively)

• Synonyms: allocate resources, channel effort, focus assets

• Antonyms: waste resources, disperse effort, misallocate

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “The ability to concentrate resources on meaningful tasks…”

relentless perseverance (sự kiên trì không ngừng – refusal to give up despite failure)

• Synonyms: dogged persistence, endurance, grit

• Antonyms: surrender, resignation, withdrawal

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “The product of relentless perseverance rather than sheer luck…”

inner resolve (ý chí nội tại – internal strength to stay committed)

• Synonyms: mental fortitude, self-discipline, willpower

• Antonyms: self-doubt, fragility, passivity

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overcome obstacles (vượt qua trở ngại – successfully deal with difficulties)

• Synonyms: surmount challenges, tackle barriers, conquer difficulties

• Antonyms: succumb to difficulties, be defeated, retreat

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Enable people to overcome obstacles and maintain progress…”

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