PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ"At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh cung cấp thêm PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), Hãy đọc kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ"At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people"IELTS WRITING TASK 2từng bước phân tích để nắm cách chia bố cục cũng như viết bài không sai task response nhé!

I. Đề bài

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

II. Từ vựng

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng topic old people IELTS

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Cách 1: Nếu theo hướng TOTALLY thì bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao advantages > disadvantages 
      • Main idea: Young people are the driving force of an economy  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "force" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Young people with boudless energy can work more efficiently, with this they can contribute to the economy of the country (HOẶC: This is because they tend to be more productive and creative than older people and thus are more likely to bring change and innovation to their countries)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "tend" tiếng anh
      • Example:
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao advantages > disadvantages 
      • Main idea: Young people are also healthier and need less spending on healthcare.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  CÁCH DÙNG "LESS" TIẾNG ANH
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example:
  • Cách 2: Nếu theo hướng PARTLY (advantages = disadvantages) thì bố cục bài như sau: 
    • Body 1: Viết về advantages
      • Main idea 1: Young people are the driving force of an economy  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng tính từ "economical" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: Young people with boudless energy can work more efficiently, with this they can contribute to the economy of the country (HOẶC: This is because they tend to be more productive and creative than older people and thus are more likely to bring change and innovation to their countries)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Giải thích: Contribute to sth 
        • Example:
      • Main idea 2: Young people are also healthier and need less spending on healthcare. 
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example:
    • Body 2: Viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: Having more younger people could lead to a lack of professionals in the society. 
        • Supporting idea: Older population may be more educated than the young one because older people have had more time to study a professional career during their lives >> People after their 50’s may have been through a lot in life, and they may be more prepared to solve any day-life problem than younger people.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ"ethics"tiếng anh
        • Example: To become a qualified physician, it is needed at least 10 years of university studies, and this may not be able for a young adult yet. 
      • Main idea 2: Younger populations are likely to have higher rate of crime simply because young people have more energy to commit crime than old people   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Phân biệt "quality, qualify, qualified & qualification" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example:

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