Giải đề"Compare the town of Brindell and local areas in 1800, 1900 and 2000"IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 18/8/2023) - Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR

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Compare the town of Brindell and local areas in 1800, 1900 and 2000

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  • Overall:
    • Brindell evolved from being primarily an agricultural-based town into an area with diverse functions and purposes.
  • Body 1: Viết về map 1
    • In 1800, the district was significantly divided by the presence of the River Stour, which was prominently situated in the center of the layout. 
    • Brindell occupied the southwestern end of the river, with two distinct agricultural zones nearby – one to the north designated for crop cultivation and another to the east reserved for animal grazing. 
    • In the northeastern part of the river, there was a wooded area.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
  • Body 2: Viết về map 2
    • By 1900, significant changes had occurred in the district, with the entire grazing area undergoing a notable transformation.
    • The upper portion of the grazing land was replaced with an industrial zone, and in the lower part, a village known as Bun Hill was established to accommodate workers.
  • Body 3: Viết về map 3
    • Fast forward to 2000, Brindell had expanded and nearly doubled in size. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
    • The farmland designated for crop cultivation had decreased in size as a result of the establishment of Bun Hill Park, and concurrently, Bun Hill had expanded, accompanied by the emergence of numerous new industries to the east of the village.

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