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Compare the town of Brindell and local areas in 1800, 1900 and 2000

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  • Overall:
    • Brindell evolved from being primarily an agricultural-based town into an area with diverse functions and purposes.
  • Body 1: Viết về map 1
    • In 1800, the district was significantly divided by the presence of the River Stour, which was prominently situated in the center of the layout. 
    • Brindell occupied the southwestern end of the river, with two distinct agricultural zones nearby – one to the north designated for crop cultivation and another to the east reserved for animal grazing. 
    • In the northeastern part of the river, there was a wooded area.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
  • Body 2: Viết về map 2
    • By 1900, significant changes had occurred in the district, with the entire grazing area undergoing a notable transformation.
    • The upper portion of the grazing land was replaced with an industrial zone, and in the lower part, a village known as Bun Hill was established to accommodate workers.
  • Body 3: Viết về map 3
    • Fast forward to 2000, Brindell had expanded and nearly doubled in size. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
    • The farmland designated for crop cultivation had decreased in size as a result of the establishment of Bun Hill Park, and concurrently, Bun Hill had expanded, accompanied by the emergence of numerous new industries to the east of the village.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The three maps illustrate how Brindell and its surrounding areas developed between 1800 and 2000.
Overall, Brindell underwent a remarkable transformation from a predominantly agriculture-oriented town (thị trấn thiên về nông nghiệp - agriculture-oriented: mainly focused on farming) into a more multi-functional area (khu vực đa chức năng - multi-functional: having many uses or purposes).

In 1800, the River Stour served as a natural divider (ranh giới tự nhiên - natural divider: a natural feature that separates areas), with Brindell situated on the southwestern bank. Surrounding it were clearly demarcated agricultural zones (khu vực nông nghiệp phân định rõ ràng - clearly demarcated: clearly separated or marked), with land to the north used for crops and the east for grazing. A dense woodland (khu rừng rậm - dense woodland: thickly forested area) occupied the northeast.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

By 1900, the grazing land had undergone a substantial shift (thay đổi đáng kể - substantial shift: major change), as an industrial hub (trung tâm công nghiệp - industrial hub: area with many factories) emerged in the upper part, and the newly built village of Bun Hill appeared below to house laborers.

By 2000, Brindell had experienced near-doubling in size, with the farmland reduced to make way for Bun Hill Park, while the village expanded in tandem with (cùng lúc với - in tandem with: at the same time as) a surge in industrial establishments east of it.

✅ New Vocabulary List with Definitions:

1. agriculture-oriented

   • English: mainly focused on agriculture or farming

   • Vietnamese: thiên về nông nghiệp

   • Synonyms: farming-based, agrarian, rural-focused

   • Antonyms: urbanized, industrialized, commercial-focused

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Brindell underwent a transformation from an agriculture-oriented town…

2. multi-functional area

   • English: a place that serves several purposes

   • Vietnamese: khu vực đa chức năng

   • Synonyms: versatile zone, mixed-use area, all-purpose region

   • Antonyms: single-purpose area, specialized zone, limited-use region

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: into a more multi-functional area.

3. natural divider

   • English: a natural feature that separates areas

   • Vietnamese: ranh giới tự nhiên

   • Synonyms: natural boundary, separator, physical barrier

   • Antonyms: connector, bridge, link

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: the River Stour served as a natural divider

4. clearly demarcated

   • English: clearly separated or defined

   • Vietnamese: phân định rõ ràng

   • Synonyms: well-defined, distinct, marked

   • Antonyms: vague, blurred, indistinct

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: clearly demarcated agricultural zones

5. dense woodland

   • English: thickly forested area

   • Vietnamese: khu rừng rậm

   • Synonyms: thick forest, lush woods, forested zone

   • Antonyms: open field, barren land, sparse vegetation

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: A dense woodland occupied the northeast.

6. substantial shift

   • English: a major or noticeable change

   • Vietnamese: thay đổi đáng kể

   • Synonyms: significant change, transformation, alteration

   • Antonyms: stability, consistency, stagnation

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: had undergone a substantial shift

7. industrial hub

   • English: an area where many factories or industries are located

   • Vietnamese: trung tâm công nghiệp

   • Synonyms: manufacturing zone, industrial center, factory zone

   • Antonyms: residential area, agricultural field, green space

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: an industrial hub emerged…

8. in tandem with

   • English: happening at the same time

   • Vietnamese: cùng lúc với

   • Synonyms: simultaneously, concurrently, alongside

   • Antonyms: independently, separately, individually

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: expanded in tandem with a surge in industries

✅ Difficult Grammar Structures with Explanation & Vietnamese Translation:

1. Brindell underwent a remarkable transformation...
   → undergo + noun (formal structure for describing change)
   → Brindell đã trải qua một sự thay đổi đáng kể...

2. Surrounding it were clearly demarcated agricultural zones...
   → Inversion for emphasis (adverbial phrase fronted, followed by verb-subject order)
   → Bao quanh nó là các khu vực nông nghiệp được phân định rõ ràng...

3. ...as an industrial hub emerged in the upper part...
   → As + clause to indicate a cause/effect or time relationship
   → Khi một trung tâm công nghiệp xuất hiện ở phần phía trên...

4. ...expanded in tandem with a surge in industrial establishments...
   → "In tandem with" as a formal expression of simultaneity
   → Mở rộng cùng lúc với sự gia tăng của các cơ sở công nghiệp...

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