Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"In many countries shops open for longer hours daily every week. What is the negative or positive effect on the shoppers and local community" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 14/4/2024)
I. Đề bài
In many countries shops open for longer hours daily every week. What is the negative or positive effect on the shoppers and local community
II. Từ vựng
IELTS TUTOR tổng hợpTừ vựng Topic Shopping trong IELTS
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách viết dạng TWO QUESTION ESSAYS
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- Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 - Positive Effects
- Main idea 1: Longer shop hours provide greater flexibility for people with busy schedules, such as those who work late or have unconventional working hours.
- Supporting idea: They can shop at their convenience, which may lead to increased customer satisfaction.
- Example: A study by Verhoef et al. (2003) found that extended store hours positively impacted customer satisfaction, particularly for those with non-traditional work schedules or family commitments hindering shopping during regular hours >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- Main idea 2: Extended shop hours can potentially boost local economic activity by providing more opportunities for shopping and spending.
- Supporting idea: This increased economic activity may benefit local businesses, leading to job creation and revenue generation for the community.
- Example: The implementation of extended hours in major DIY stores, such as Home Depot and Lowe's, addresses the challenge faced by residents in suburban and rural areas with limited daytime shopping windows, potentially benefiting the local economy through increased sales, job creation, and spillover effects on nearby businesses
- Main idea 1: Longer shop hours provide greater flexibility for people with busy schedules, such as those who work late or have unconventional working hours.
- Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 - Negative Effects
- Main idea 1: Extending shop hours may disproportionately affect small, independent businesses that may struggle to afford the costs associated with longer operating hours.
- Supporting idea: This could potentially lead to market consolidation and a loss of diversity in the retail landscape.
- Example: BThe struggle faced by Main Street Bakery, a family-owned business, against a big box chain with 24/7 operations illustrates the challenge of extended shop hours, where labor costs and competition threaten smaller businesses, potentially leading to market consolidation and a loss of diversity in the retail landscape, emphasizing the importance of balancing convenience with supporting local enterprises for a vibrant community.
- Main idea 2: For shop owners and employees, longer hours may result in increased stress and a poorer work-life balance.
- Supporting idea: This could lead to burnout, decreased job satisfaction, and negative effects on mental and physical health.
- Main idea 1: Extending shop hours may disproportionately affect small, independent businesses that may struggle to afford the costs associated with longer operating hours.
- Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 - Positive Effects
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
In many parts of the world, retail stores are now opening for prolonged hours (EN: extended or long-lasting hours / VI: thời gian kéo dài) every day of the week. While this shift may be seen as a response to modern lifestyles, it brings both positive and negative consequences for consumers and local communities.
On the positive side, round-the-clock access (EN: continuous or 24/7 availability / VI: sự tiếp cận suốt ngày đêm) to stores offers greater schedule flexibility (EN: the ability to choose convenient times / VI: sự linh hoạt về thời gian), especially for those with non-traditional work shifts (EN: working hours different from the usual 9–5 / VI: giờ làm việc không truyền thống). These individuals often find it difficult to shop during regular business hours. The ability to shop at their convenience improves customer satisfaction (EN: the degree to which customers are happy with a service / VI: sự hài lòng của khách hàng) and increases purchasing likelihood. A study by Verhoef et al. (2003) demonstrated that shoppers with irregular routines (EN: non-fixed daily patterns / VI: lịch sinh hoạt không cố định) appreciated extended hours the most. Furthermore, expanded opening times (EN: longer durations of store operation / VI: thời gian mở cửa kéo dài) can bolster local economies by encouraging spending, which supports job creation and enhances community income levels.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?
However, this trend can negatively impact small enterprises. Many mom-and-pop stores (EN: small, family-run businesses / VI: cửa hàng gia đình nhỏ) lack the resources to remain open for extended periods, making them less competitive. This may result in market homogenization (EN: reduction in business variety / VI: sự đồng nhất thị trường), where large retailers dominate and community character (EN: the unique identity of a local area / VI: bản sắc cộng đồng) is lost. Additionally, shopkeepers and their staff may suffer from overwork-induced stress (EN: mental strain caused by excessive working hours / VI: căng thẳng do làm việc quá sức) and poor work-life balance (EN: the equilibrium between job and personal life / VI: cân bằng công việc và cuộc sống). This can lead to burnout (EN: extreme physical or mental exhaustion / VI: kiệt sức), lowering employee morale and harming mental and physical health.
In conclusion, while longer shop hours offer clear benefits for convenience and economic growth, they must be weighed against the pressure placed on small businesses and workers.
🔹 Synonyms & Antonyms for “burnout”
Synonyms: exhaustion, fatigue, breakdown
Antonyms: vitality, energy, motivation
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “This can lead to burnout, lowering employee morale and harming mental and physical health.”
🔹 Advanced Grammar Structures & Vietnamese Translation
“While this shift may be seen as…”
→ Mặc dù sự thay đổi này có thể được xem như là...
(Complex sentence with concessive clause)“...especially for those with non-traditional work shifts, who often…”
→ ...đặc biệt là đối với những người có giờ làm việc không truyền thống, những người thường...
(Relative clause adds precision)“This may result in market homogenization, where…”
→ Điều này có thể dẫn đến sự đồng nhất thị trường, nơi mà...
(Noun clause with defining relative clause)“...they must be weighed against the pressure placed on…”
→ ...chúng cần được cân nhắc đối với áp lực đặt lên...
(Passive with modal verb for formal tone)
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