Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"The pie charts below shows the distribution of students by gender and by the subject they are studying at a major university in 2020"IELTS WRITING TASK 1
I. Đề bài
The pie charts below shows the distribution of students by gender and by the subject they are studying at a major university in 2020
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The pie charts compare the distribution (n: the way something is shared – sự phân bổ) of university students by gender and by academic discipline at a major university in 2020.
Overall, the proportions of male and female students were relatively balanced (adj: fairly equal – tương đối cân bằng), while clear gender differences existed across subject choices. Men were largely concentrated (collocation: mainly found – tập trung chủ yếu) in Engineering and Business, whereas women were more evenly represented (collocation: spread across groups fairly equally – phân bố đồng đều) across multiple fields.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
Among male students, Engineering accounted for the largest share (collocation: highest percentage – tỷ lệ lớn nhất) at 40%, followed by Business and Science, each at 20% and 15%. Arts and Humanities, Education, and other subjects all made up minor proportions of 5% each.
In contrast, female students showed more diverse academic preferences. Business was the most popular field at 25%, followed by Education (20%) and Science (15%). Meanwhile, Arts and Humanities and Engineering contributed 15% and 10% respectively. Only 15% of women were enrolled in other subjects.
NEW VOCABULARY LIST
distribution – sự phân bổ; the way something is shared
Synonyms: allocation, spread, division
Antonyms: concentration, collection, gathering
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “the distribution of university students…”
relatively balanced – tương đối cân bằng; fairly equal
Synonyms: even, comparable, proportionate
Antonyms: uneven, disproportionate, skewed
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “were relatively balanced…”
largely concentrated – tập trung chủ yếu; mainly found in one area
Synonyms: clustered, focused, dominated
Antonyms: scattered, dispersed, spread out
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “men were largely concentrated in Engineering…”
evenly represented – phân bố đồng đều; spread equally across categories
Synonyms: well-distributed, proportionately spread, balanced
Antonyms: unevenly represented, skewed, lopsided
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “women were more evenly represented…”
largest share – tỷ lệ lớn nhất; highest proportion
Synonyms: greatest portion, biggest segment, dominant share
Antonyms: smallest share, least portion, minor segment
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Engineering accounted for the largest share…”
DIFFICULT GRAMMAR STRUCTURES
1. Complex contrast structure
“Overall, the proportions… were relatively balanced, while clear gender differences existed across subject choices.”
→ while introduces contrast in one sentence, academic and concise.
VN: “Trong khi tỷ lệ nam và nữ khá cân bằng, sự khác biệt rõ rệt lại xuất hiện trong lựa chọn ngành học.”
2. Reduced relative clause
“…fields contributed 5% each.”
(full form: “fields which contributed 5% each.”)
VN: “những ngành chiếm 5%.”
3. Cleft sentence for emphasis
“It was Business that became the most popular field among female students.” (used in explanation)
VN: “Chính ngành Kinh doanh là ngành phổ biến nhất với nữ.”
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