I. Đề bài
The diagram shows the small-scale production of smoked fish.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
III. Phân tích
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- Overall: The process has various stages, beginning with the preparation of the fish and ending with the delivery of the finished product. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng tính từ "various" tiếng anh
- Body 1:
- The fish are cleaned with a knife and prepared ready for the production process, before being placed in a container of salt water for 30 minutes. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt "ago, for, before" tiếng anh
- They are cooked for 5 minutes in hot salted water, and the fish are then removed.
- Body 2:
- During the smoking process, in a vat, the fish are hung by wires on top of some material which burns and produces smoke. The vat is covered with wood so that the smoke cannot escape. After 30 minutes, the fish are smoked and ready for the next stage, which is the addition of yellow colouring. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: When the fish are ready to be smoked, they are first thawed out in fresh water and then have their heads removed and cut into suitable pieces. The fish are then soaked in salty water with yellow colouring before being smoked)
- The smoked fish are then packed in closed containers, and, finally, transported in trucks to where they will be sold >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "finally" tiếng anh