Phân tích "Accomodation and transport problems are increasing in many large cities. Businesses are encouraged to move to rural areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Thi máy 20/4/2022 & 28/6/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích đề thi "spend their leisure time with their colleagues"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Accomodation and transport problems are increasing in many large cities. Businesses are encouraged to move to rural areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Thi máy 23/4/2022)

Accomodation and transport problems are increasing in many large cities. Businesses are encouraged to move to rural areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (advantages > disadvantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao advantages > disadvantages
      • Main idea: (Viết về accommodation) This policy can ease the housing shortage in big cities resulting from overpopulation. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "population" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:
        • Large areas of land which are released due to the movement of companies could pave the way for the construction of more residential areas. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "pave the way for something" tiếng anh
        • This will lead to the fall of housing prices and more people will have the chance to settle in urban areas.
      • Example: In Tokyo, many companies have moved their headquarters to suburban areas, freeing up substantial amounts of land in the city center. This land has been repurposed for residential developments, creating new housing options for city dwellers. This strategy has helped alleviate the housing crisis by increasing the availability of affordable housing in the city center.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao advantages > disadvantages
      • Main idea: (Viết về transport problems) Moving firms to rural areas can contribute to resolving the pressing problem of traffic congestions in metropolitan areas. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng tính từ "rural" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: The huge influx of commuters into the city every rush hour would be reduced as many of these people would now be travelling to their relocated jobs. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Cách paraphrase từ "reduce" tiếng anh
      • Example: In Japan, the government has implemented policies to encourage businesses to move from Tokyo to rural areas to alleviate severe traffic congestion by reducing the number of daily commuters, resulting in companies like Fujitsu establishing offices in smaller cities like Fukushima, where employees now travel shorter distances to their new workplaces, noticeably decreasing traffic volume during peak hours in the capital.

  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé)
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "trend" tiếng anh
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages
      • Main idea 1: This policy can ease the housing shortage in big cities resulting from overpopulation.
        • Supporting idea: Large areas of land which are released due to the movement of companies could pave the way for the construction of more residential areas. This will lead to the fall of housing prices and more people will have the chance to settle in urban areas. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng tính từ "residential" tiếng anh
        • Example: In Tokyo, many companies have moved their headquarters to suburban areas, freeing up substantial amounts of land in the city center. This land has been repurposed for residential developments, creating new housing options for city dwellers. This strategy has helped alleviate the housing crisis by increasing the availability of affordable housing in the city center.
      • Main idea 2: Moving firms to rural areas can contribute to resolving the pressing problem of traffic congestions in metropolitan areas. >> IELTS TUTOR Giải thích: Contribute to sth
        • Supporting idea: The huge influx of commuters into the city every rush hour would be reduced as many of these people would now be travelling to their relocated jobs. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "many" tiếng anh
        • Example: In Japan, the government has implemented policies to encourage businesses to move from Tokyo to rural areas to alleviate severe traffic congestion by reducing the number of daily commuters, resulting in companies like Fujitsu establishing offices in smaller cities like Fukushima, where employees now travel shorter distances to their new workplaces, noticeably decreasing traffic volume during peak hours in the capital.

    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages
      • Main idea 1: skilled workers are a rarity in rural areas
        • Supporting idea: Most people living in small towns and villages do not receive sufficient education to undertake intellectual jobs. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng tính từ "sufficient" tiếng anh
        • Example: In many rural areas of India, such as the village of Gagret in Himachal Pradesh where education is limited to the 10th grade and there are no nearby colleges or vocational training centers, the lack of educational opportunities forces a significant portion of the population to engage in agricultural work
      • Main idea 2: businesses will have a lot of costs to build their project again, so there are chances that companies will not make a profit sometimes, thereby giving their rivals a great chance to dominate the market.
        • Supporting idea: These companies will have to spend a huge amount of money rebuilding their premises. Based in regional areas, companies risk distancing themselves further from their customers, their suppliers and other partners in their business transactions, which can weaken their profitability. Their competitiveness may be adversely affected. >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Word form "profitable" tiếng anh - luyenthidaihoctienganhonlin

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